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The Dark Truth

When a powerful creature from Tartarus escapes, it is up to the efforts of Twilight and her friends to stop this threat from ruining Equestria.

*What my original idea for the S4 finale was going to be xD*

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1 · 9th May 2014 · 1,051 words
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2 · 9th May 2014 · 1,026 words
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3 · 10th May 2014 · 1,380 words
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4 · 11th May 2014 · 1,183 words
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5: Final Chapter · 12th May 2014 · 1,410 words
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musicluvr1974

musicluvr1974 #1 · May 20th, 2014 · · · 5: Final Chapter ·

Pretty good. Kind of bare-bones, though. Could you describe things more? Get an English teacher or someone like that to look it over so you could see where to put in adjectives or description?

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