Hi, I am a young writer, (As of now) I have an interest in reading FanFictions, but only recently have I written, well, my first complete one. I dont have a planned schedule, so, just wait...
Set back at the start of "Keep calm and flutter on" Fluttershy decides to befriend Discord, after they get used to each other, everything seems fine. Until they find out about something Celestia found. Will the actions between Fluttershy and Discord strengthen their relationship as, "friends"? Or will Fluttershy's friends do the opposite?
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I like it
Aww
.Though the diologe was a bit confusing
4456754 Yeah thank you, I just didn't feel like writing after almost every spoken sentence, 'He said (Insert emotion here)' I Mostly just wanted to try and make some Fluttercord happen. That was my first inspiration. I realized there wasn't too many Fluttercord fics (I read like all of them... allof them...) and I realized, hey why don't I make my own? And so I did. I don't really want praise, I just wanted to be able to create in a way that I could do, (I can't draw art to save my life, other things like that.) and have it be mine.
Seriously though, who knows, sometimes I just don't want to write, but when I do, I write fast, and I get excited, and I genuinely like it. I didn't think I would like writing as much as I do.
But anyways, sometimes I think of a good idea for a story. I want to eventually write a unique story with my own plot line/story arch. (I most likely wont have any OC's because I know how annoying it can be to just showered with pointless OC's.)
Anyways, I am probably younger than most people think, I do meet the age requirement here. But some people here are adults ranging up to elderly, and etc. I don't really care if you are old, but it usually means you have had plenty of practice etc. etc. And so far this was literally my first story ever!
Anyways, sorry for the long comment. I just want to personally thank anybody reading this. You at least took the time to read my story, some may be enjoyed, others, maybe not so much. Either way, thanks for spending your time reading one of my stories.
Cheers!
4369611 Thank you for positive reassurance, and sorry this reply isn't as long as the one to shine, I just wanted to send that message out. Any positive comment as is good as any other, but anyways, thanks!
Confusing, but nice! You know, you don't have to put he or she said after the dialogue to make it clear who said it. You can have an action, like: "Would cotton candy make it better?" Discord snaps his claw and it appears. Or you can have the dialogue between two characters as he/she said for the first few pieces of dialogue and have it switch back and forth for the rest. For that one, you have to make sure that it goes character 1, then character 2, then character 1, and so on. Otherwise, it gets confusing. Sorry. I'm ranting.
This is a really cute story though!!!
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I can't make sense of most of this, and all most of it happens to be only dialogue, could you fix this?
I'm sorry, but this story is too incomprehensive to read properly.