• Member Since 20th Dec, 2013
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BumbleFlow


I am a purple alicorn, with magenta eyes. I live in the everfree. And my story truly is unique.

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On a regular day, the mane 6 decide to have a sleep over.

All goes well until the next day,

Pinkie Pie won't wake up,

What is to happen to the pony of parties?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 10 )

Several times apostrophes weren't used correctly, or they weren't used at all. Regardless of grammar, this is a nice story. I can't wait to read more! :twilightsmile:

One nitpick, Owlowiscious is a BOY, not a girl. :facehoof:

Sonta Dusk Fan -
I'll try to work on that. Heh.. Not easy to type when you use an iPhone, the things are not exactly smart when it comes to grammar.

SuperPinkBrony12
Well then... I did not know this, I always thought Owlicious was a girl. Woops.

~Flow

Didn't they try to wake Pinkie up first?

this is awsome! needs to continue

Sonta Dusk Fan -
Um... I think so. Let's just say they were freaking out too much to do so. It was midnight when I typed this... Heh.

alexiszocco -
Thankyou. So very much. Haha. It will continue.

~Flow

Just a tip, you see that ">>" in the upper righthoof corner? Click that,and you can respond to ponies, Miss Flow

Also, I seemed to have found another book of yours, it was in the Ponyville Library, in the back of a bookshelf. Here ya are.

~Lucky

Really good story.Can't wait for more.

4759653
Yeah I figured the little arrows were in the top rightpaw corner a while ago. (Why do I say paw? Original persona is a wolf.) *nervously laughs* Did I say paw? I meant hoof..

And thank you. I guess I should probably work on the story. Hehe. I like how it ends.
*grins* You'll see~

~Flow

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