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ArgonMatrix


I've never seen a place that's quite like this. Everything is turned around; this crazy world is upside-down.

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:pinkiegasp:Did Twilight cut her horn off!?

See now I gotta go kill someone. What's with the cliff hangar? I expect a sequel will be out of the press's by tomorrow. I really want to know what happened here.
Love your style. Dialogs oriented, but clear and distinct voices for the characters. So hard to find now a days. Though the first one was kinda... I don't know deeper. It was a clear view into Twilights mind and her fear/acknowledgment of the self. I have officially become addicted to your story's. Any plans for a multi chapter fic?

Very interesting. Looking forward to more, and I'm not the avid fic reader I used to be.

It's very difficult to pull off a story with just dialogue. While you managed to do just that, the ending is, confusing. I have no idea what's happening here, and I think most readers are gonna want some sort of explanation. :unsuresweetie:

Otherwise, this is pretty good. I feel like most of this was based off of a comment I made in the first story of your series, but that just made it all the more compelling. With the exception of the confusing ending, this is exactly how I picture Twi, Spike, and Rarity reacting to a situation like this. Well done. :moustache:

I'd say that the experiment was a success, Arg. That dark twist at the end... wow.

Drastic measures taken by Twilight. Damn. Didn't really see that coming.

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Feel free to read into it however you like. I make no promises one way or the other, though.

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Can't promise a sequel quite that soon, but I'm glad I've caught your intrigue! As for a multi-chapter fic, I do have one in the works right now. No ETA on it just yet, but know that it exists.

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Very glad to know that you're interested. Thanks for reading!

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Looks like this story had the exact effect I intended! I wanted to show people that it's entirely possible to make a clear, coherent story with only dialogue, but I also wanted to show how easy it is to bewilder and confuse readers with that exact same format. There will be an explanation in due time, but for now I'm content to see how people read into the ending.

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Glad you found it interesting, T.D.! I figured the ending would throw people for a bit of a loop.

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Drastic times call for drastic measures. The question now is whether the times were drastic enough for things to be interpreted that way. For the time being, that's up to you to decide.

Damn dude, everything was sunshine, lollipops and rainbows then "Boom!" that wham line pops ya right in the groin. :pinkiehappy:
I really liked the solely dialogue driven story and it was almost perfect characterized, I say almost because of the, y'know, last part. :unsuresweetie:


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--Pyro The Faithful Reader

An enjoyable read and an interesting take on a story just using dialogue and it worked. The ending was an unexpected curve ball but still an interesting idea as we are left to imagine what would happen after said twi incident. Keep up the good work Argon!

-Frost :pinkiesmile:

The all-dialogue experiment was a success, and the ending was baffling as you intended. But whether or not that builds intrigue depends - in my case at least - on the author. Were it not for your existing body of work, I wouldn't bother planning to come back to check for a sequel.

I shall pop in occasionally.

More. Must have more! Really engaging little series you're setting up here. Definitely worth a follow!

Oh damn, Twilight has issues with Sparity, and fears her own feelings of the Drake/Rarity & unlimited power:twilightoops::raritydespair::moustache: WoW more:derpyderp1:

Amm

Interesting sequel. I hope you continue the series eventually.

Oh come on! A cliffhanger with no guaranteed continuation? Thats just evil! What did Twilight do to her horn!? Please tell me she didn't cut it off!

You kinda have to give give us a resolution to all these. At some point.

Damn you, you've made me like something with the dark tag. I might never forgive you for that. Now write some more.

Sequel. Like now.

What was on the floor and in Spike's bed..?

Hmm . . . I liked it. All dialogue was a good decision, I think, but this ending isn't looking too good. Everyone is talking about dismemberment, but that's rather extreme. Like, really extreme. Not only is she a unicorn (imagine the impact it would have in a unicorn to lose his or her horn), but her cutie mark is magic. She's the embodiment of magic. Something truly terrible, something unbelievably decadent, dark, and terrifying would have had to have happened if Twilight felt it necessary to remove her horn.

So I don't know. Let's see what happens in the next story.

Man. These read as really neat one shots till the end of this one and now I'm really really keen to have more of them!

Are you planning on writing any more?

Also, for an unedited style you do a wonderful job, especially in the way the characters talk without breaking their expected nuance. Yay.

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