Jayce is a trainer from the Kalos region, all through out his travels he's gone out of his way to be kind to those he meet and have adventures with his oh so fluffy Meowstic Nao. But when Arceus escapes his prison and decides to move all of his children and a few worthy human to a new world chaos is bound to ensue. The problem is this new world doesn't know they're coming or even what Pokemon are, did I mention this world was filled with colorful ponies? Being in a new world is scary enough, but the humans who find themselves here are turned into Pokemon and Jayce is no exception.
I would like to thank Zeusdemigod131 for creating a great setting and allowing me to have my own adventures in it. I highly recommend getting up to date on his story before starting mine, it'll help.
haha Rock Soup meet Rock Pokemon
...let's see where this will go.
Tracked down.
Hopefully down a road with a few bumps and lots of shenanigans.
About time someone else joined me on the side story bandwagon.
Is this gonna become a thing?
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Depends on what you mean by 'a thing'.
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I believe he refers to a potential onslaught of stories all set in ZeusDemi's universe... like it already happened for fics like "Human and You", "Five score divided by four" etc etc.
...you were referring at that, right? Oh, the doubt! It HURTS!
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I think he means will this become a thing, like the "humans cosplaying, then magically sent to Equestria to cause havoc." And I personally hope not. There are far too many of those.
I hope I'm not being too forward here but for the future, those who put a thumbs down please put a reason. It's impossible to improve without being critiqued and I would rather see why someone disliked my story rather than going on thinking 'oh someone just disliked to be mean' because I know that does happen.
Also I think I can understand that, some stories get popular enough that a great number of spin offs occur, such as Fallout Equestria and so on. While that might happen to this setting I would hope that whose who decide to write using it would ask and work with Zeus, I know he helped improve my story with his ideas and opinions.
Anyway sorry about my rant there, expect a new chapter in the next day or so.
4357638 I wouldn't expect people to explain their dislikes. They never explain on my stories either. As a new fanfic writer I would love critique, but I don't get any
4358045 They don't usually explain on mine either, the few who have either voiced a dislike for, Arceus, Pokephilia, or how I made Blueblood... Blueblood, at least those are the most common.
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What you did to blueblood is genius! xD
Will be watching this. Please continue, its well written and a good idea.
I'd be happy if "this" becomes a thing.
Interesting start. I'll be sure to keep an eye on this and see where it goes.
So...when is the next chapter coming? Progress report?
Today hopefully, tomorrow at the latest
Love the trainer-pokemon relationship...
I'm not a creepy pokephiliac, I swear!
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Going to try my best, honest I will just don't take away the fluffy D:
still following
You made a slight mistake, psychic attacks aren't super effective against ghost types.
derpstache times 10 for you.
...did I spy a DBZ abridged reference?
4369653 intresting.
moar.
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Yep I know, but if you mean psyshock then it attacks physical defense and mismagius has a really low def :3
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Maybe :3
So before anyone asks when the next chapter comes out or anything the answer is...it could be a few days, my intentions are to put out at least one a week.
4371732 Yes, that is true but next time make sure that you word that detail correctly. This could become a pretty good story and the last thing you want is some flamer getting on your case just because they think you got pokemon type match-ups wrong.
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Will do thanks for the input :D I really do appreciate feedback.
4372338 Your welcome.
>cute couple
>cat pokemon
>pokemon
>chapter lengths be fine
>nigga level cuteness
I'm watching you
well, at least they didn't end up outside a Salem type town!
that would have turned out gory
for the ponies
Nope its more of the 'keep inside and maybe they'll go away' type town. I've driven through one of those before, its really really not fun.
Keep it up, sempai!
Hehehe...
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Sweet story, keep it up!
4378455 that comment+that pic...EPIC
oh and you author, keep up the good work...
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I get that a lot
[Insert Smug Face Here]
I'm imagining a fucking Blissey lying on a fluffy cushion and now my heart stopped beating.
Damn, for an emotionless husk like me I really do have a weak spot for cute and fluffy things
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You and me both.
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*hugs fucking tightly the fluffy Meowstic*
I meant to do a hardcore writing session today and sat but sooo much happened, I'm going to try and get the next chapter out tomorrow.
If that's how they met then damn, it's no wonder they went right into a relationship when he became a pokemon.
Dis is gud fic! This is, what, the fourth sidefic to new world new way? I really think NWNW is gonna be the next 5s/4. I even plan on writing my own NWNW sidefic once school gets out for summer (spioler: it will star a certain former villain from the games...)
If Joy is against their relationship after hearing that then I'll need to get Blaziken and Lucario from Trottingham and Manehatten to pummel a Blissey.
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Anybody but Giovanni. That one bugger who shall never see the light of day. Though I wonder if someone will write a fic about how things agre going back on earth...
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Let me guess. N, right?
4419016 nope
4418723 never played gen 1 anyway, so nope, not him either. And even if I had, he still IS a villain.
4419304 I believe I'm correct in my assumption that you're planning on using Colress correct?
4419436 yes cuz colress is best villain and also no one wrote him into their fic yet. now I just gotta think of what he's gonna turn into.
4419456 Never played B/W 2, so could someone explain to me who this Colress character is, and where he stands on the villain scale?
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4419466 colress is incredibly dedicated to science. he isn't so much a villain as a scientist. his goal is to bring out pokemons' full power. 2 yrs after the events of b/w, ghetsis offered colress the chance to replace N as head of team plasma. Colress took him up on the offer, but mostly just so he could work more on his research. also I'm not sure, but it's been theorized that he invented mega-evolution.
I noticed how the plot and characters are all-in-all interesting but it may add to the experience if you could get an editor or a proofreader. The grammar is mediocre at best, but it kind of kills some of the scenes in a way.