After years of prosperity ushered in by Apple Enterprises, Ponyville is no longer the quaint little village it once was. Now a booming industrial and shipping center, Ponyville has built itself up, but the shadow it casts has grown too, and no one knows that better than the young Apple Cider.
Special thanks to Spyro Conspiracy Theorist for the wonderful custom art.
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Well this here is an old concept battered and brutalized by the folks of this site.
Though in your case I can make an exception. A few grammar and word problems here and there but not enough to detract from the actual story and most likely missed by the average reader. What I mean to say is, good job. Good job.
*edit*: Some fitting music, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXKrsJZWqK0
512834 That's my motivation for making a somewhat good one. After seeing to many like this butchered, (Me being guilty of one of those) I set about trying to make a good one that would flow well and still be new enough to not be a copy paste, but still loyal to batman
Bueno
Looking forward to reading the next chapter, from what I can gather you are building this off the 1990's version of Batman (The Animated Series) if I am correct, which was my personal favorite. Keep up the great work!!!