After an experiment Twilight was working on goes bad, the entire land of Equestria finds itself within a strange new world. Follow the stories of a few denizens of this new mixed world as they learn to cope with science, magic, and even each other. As a sinister plot of hatred, racism, intolerance, death and an even a deeper rooted evil that begins to reveal itself.
This story will have minor gore (Blood but that's about it because I can't really handle gore myself) and innuendos/implied sex. Also please keep in mind that I am still in school so I may not be able to get a chapter out every week.
Scratch that all I have to deal with now is work.
Other than that please enjoy the story and as always; constructive criticism is always welcome.
Special to my editor for making this story much more readable.
Well, I'll be the first to comment: It's an idea, but it need improvement, particularly in grammar and sentence structure. Nobody likes a wall of text paragraph.
4417345 Yeah I've been trying to work on that. After all, it has been the bane of my writing since... well ever. also, if I didn't have a friend of mine edit each chapter before hand, this would be a grammar train wreck. I really appreciate the criticism though, thank you.