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Time Turner is a watchmaker. He's good at working with the little screws and springs in the tiny devices.

Twilight Sparkle's heart is not a watch, but he'll do his best to work on it anyway.

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TwiTurner needs more love.

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A bit quickly paced, but still cute.

This is a seriously under-rated pairing. I'm glad to see that somepony is actually giving it its due.

like before I read because TwiTurner :yay:

How bout callin it TiTwi? :trollestia:

It needed to be longer and slower-paced, but overall, not bad.

Aww, that was cute.:twilightsmile:

(this will sound insulting, but i do not mean it as so) As i read it, i found the content and little details pretty good but the overarching story I have seen dozens of times. concept, conflict, resolution, fairy tail ending.. bam bam bam bam, done. all quickly highlighted, and quickly dismissed.
This might just be my distaste for romance shorts as most all seem to fit this and leave little to the reader to wonder "where is this going?".

But with my bias view aside... the setup was fairly smooth until the 'big reveal'. It was refreshing that there were no references to the 'doctor whooves' universe on this. Not that I would have hated it, but to see simple earth pony, non time lord Time turner was nice.

So I give 2 ratings :bias 5.9 of 10, bias aside... 8 of 10 ?

(Though it might be funny to find them in non predicable situations down the road. "the unforeseen troubles of Time Turner and Twilight Sparkle.":rainbowlaugh:)

I know some TwiTurner, but it's not called that. As some of you my know, it's the Discorded Doctor and Twilight

This was a great story. I loved that part where Rainbow Dash saw them Kiss.

Honestly? I read this because that description was uncommonly good (and did exactly what a good description should do), even if just for a very short story.

Short and simple. Nothing to scream about, but nothing bad with it either.

(prefers Time Turner to Whooves)
(still imagined a British accent while reading)
(:raritydespair:)


Little fast and had barely any conflict whatsoever -- but honestly, there's a place for stuff like this. I can appreciate subversion as much as the next person but so many people try so hard to be different that they forget that it's also just really flippin' nice to just read fluffster shipfics like this, too. :twilightsmile:

PHR

I'm afraid I have to agree — this was way, way too short. I love the concept, but 1000 words isn't enough to properly explore this ship.

Actually, now that I think about it...

...Yep, there goes my brain again. :facehoof: So many fic ideas, so little time...

This is excellent writing. JOLLY GOOD SHOW!:pinkiehappy:

Something like.my first relationship (though i dont like to talk about it)
I was a senior, she was a sophomore. We only got together because of, well, we talked about our *ahemsexualityahem* with each other. After two months, she foumd out i was a brony, and her and her friends teased (restraining to say bullied) and criticized me about that. The next day I avoided her, and have been ever since (we did hve a breakup talk in the middle of the weeklong 'teasing'. I try my best ever sincce then to avoid her; but one problem is she lives right around the corner and her bus stop (she's still in High School) in front of my house (i live at the corner of two streets).
So yeah that was my first relationship. And i just made myself a little depressed.
Sorry for the bumming out, its just something that needed to be let out

Thime to cheer up. Pinkie please do the honors:

Hmmph. Rainbow Dash would not interrupt that. Plus, she'd be wearing her "incognito" hood. (For library trips)

This is awesome! Please continue this story. I want to read more! If you do not continue I will look like this: :raritycry::raritydespair::twilightangry2::pinkiesick::pinkiegasp::flutterrage::ajsleepy::rainbowderp:

Then a book caught his eye. It had a glossy pink cover smothered in hearts, with the title written in curly purple cursive.

Stallion Tips For Shy Mares. The hay?

This didn't seem like something Twilight would like to read...

Somehow, the watchmaker forgot what 'library' means, or that the Golden Oak Library was Ponyville's public library long before it was Twilight's home...

I can't upvote this, because it's too rushed and has no real buildup. This "relationship" just springs out of a vacuum.

4349001 YES. I love this pairing.

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