His life had fallen apart. Faced with the end of the world, horrible guilt, and eventually the victim of a conspiracy. Takatora Kureshima has been living in hell for many years, and now has been cast into it. Or has he? He awakens in a world where such violence doesn't exist. Now he is the only human in this land, and now faced with protecting them from Inves-like creatures that have sprouted up. Can he trust anyone in this bright, overly happy world?
Gaim x MLP (Takes place after episode 28)
Chapters (1)
honestly, considering Gaim's awesome sotry I am suprised that are barely any fanfictions of it.
4340887 Well that's how the cookie crumbles, unfortunately.
Time for Takatora to live more.
I was currently working on a gaim kill LA kill cross but now Igot a idea on what i can do for a movie on the fic.
So, it's a Slaying Moon in Equestria deal, huh? Well, the Melon Defender is certainly built for protecting the user, so why not others? And enemies better watch out, because he's going to go Chanbara Bara on them if they try anything.
I hope someone gets the reference I made there.
Okay, a few issues.
You might want to chance the color used for what the Lockseeds say to match that Lockseed's color, and put quotes around what they say.
Also, you might want to pick a spelling and stick with it. You used both Kouta and Kota.
And why do you translate the word Henshin, but not the Tenka Gomen that the Melon Lockseed says? Either use Henshin instead of Transform, or use By Heaven's Decree instead of Tenka Gomen (By Heaven's Decree). Personally, I'd prefer the former, where you don't bother translating that sort of stuff, but that's just me. My point is you need to pick one or the other and stick, with it, instead of flip-flopping like this.
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This story hasn't been updated in months. Probably not going to work on it ever again.
5404816 Damn. In that case, you could at least have changed the tag from Incomplete to Cancelled.
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Probably. I didn't think anyone actually cared about it.
5406435 Can I adopt this story?
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Go ahead.
5509358 Awesome! ... how exactly do I go about doing that?
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You can just continue from where I left off. I'll delete this story after you post yours.
5509404 K can you just PM me the information on the story?
Hmmmm, Takatora...honestly, as a Rider he'd disappointed me during the series. Maybe during the upcoming Rider DVD I might like him more, but his character's flaws almost negated his extremely awesome fighting power and great motivation. Balancing that with poor judgement when it came to those he trusted and his initial compliance with the plans from The Corporation...and well I just couldn't get behind him,
Honestly, if you're using him, I want to see him actually develop as a character. I always saw him as another contender for the Golden Fruit, despite not being connected to Mai. In this story, I see the potential for that kind of character to be explored...that and so much of his power was bound up in so few Lockseeds, even Kaito had more forms than Takatora...and we all know how switching forms can be an advantage.
Anyway, nice start, and hopefully we'll see more from you in time.
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I dropped this story. I don't write for this site anymore.
5662797 Yeah, uh, he played this story to me