Sometimes you can ignore a checklist item, especially one written by a compulsive list-maker.
This is not one of those times.
When Twilight learns that her friends have started laughing for no apparent reason, she decides to find out why.
All canon My Little Pony ponies, characters, and associated locations © Lauren Faust and Hasbro Incorporated. I am not going to even try to sell this or make any sort of profit with it. (A fanfiction by a newbie fic writer? Who would buy it?)
As with the last story, if someone wants to make cover art, I'd like to see what you come up with!
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Obviously. And Hasbro owns MLP, not Lauren Faust.
Irrelevant. Pinkie is who Pinkie is regardless of the magical artifact she can control.
What does that mean? Did you pull that out of a D&D spellbook?
Other than that, the story was written decently enough. It's just not all that interesting.
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It may be obvious, but... it may not be obvious to them that they know I know it's theirs, so I'm essentially telling them. Also, I guess the article that said to do that needs updating. (And I need to follow a little more of it, it seems.)
I can change it to "I've tried a spell for seeing invisible things," if that's better.
Fair enough. Hopefully that'll get better with practice.
I'll be honest here, I don't hate the story, but it's just... Meh, that's all it is is meh. It doesn't have much of a solid plot