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kofiddleboy


I'M A NERD WHOOOOOOO

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NOTE: I was editing this for the original author while trying to keep as much of his wording as possible, but he cancelled the original story, and I lost interest. So this is just...here, I guess.
(Takes place after the events of Star Trek Online) The Klingons are back to being the Federation's allies, but our courageous heroes aren't out of the woods yet! A small planet, with a strange type of radiation, has caught the Borg's ocular implants. What more, it's inhabited by... ponies? It looks like the natives can control that radiation, and they've caught much more than the Borg's eye. Tal'Shiar, Jem'Haddar, everyone's gunning for these multicolored friendship equines. But, what makes this radiation so special?
What can they see that we can't?
I'm the Co-Author of this story (Currently working on the cover art!) Who's doing most of the editing. I'm posting the edited chapters here.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

4340581 noop, we're still writing it. I have the first half, he has the second.

4340583 thanks is this one different then

4340592 nope, just edited out some stuff. More to come!

4340592 Well actually, I fixed all the grammar and sentence structure mistakes. But the edited ones are going on his account.

This isn't all that bad.:pinkiesmile:
Also, you missed some small errors:

“It’s still absurd! The Borg only care about assimilation, why would they want to ‘study’ some pastel colored ponies?

No end quote.

“ponie's”

:facehoof:
I'll think I'll continue reading this, even though I know near nothing about Star Trek.

4354360 Oh god
I'll get right on those
Also thanks for reading

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