Sunset Town

At the end of the sun's run around the world, it ends its journey by passing by one final town.

Sunset Town, or as some have taken a fancy to calling it "Twilight Village" is one of the more robust parts of Equestria. It's unique in its own way, but small, and because of this, many regard Sunset Town, and the Sunset Ponies as an endangered rarity, if only at times of trouble.

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azednew

azednew #1 · Jun 22nd, 2014 · 2 · ·

Swell/10

NorrisThePony

NorrisThePony #2 · Jun 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Sometimes the best stories are ones like these, where they seem almost rooted in the shows canon, even when they are entirely original. Stories that expand on the world of Equestria, so much so that in a few months to come I'll have to remind myself that I read about 'Sunset Town' in a fanfic, and not any of the official show material. Overall, magnificent job with this story.

Bronydragon

Bronydragon #3 · Jun 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Really nice little slice of life story there.
Maybe you can go a bit more into the structure of the city and showing off the general layout. You could get Celli back to the town on short notice because the ponies there just finished a big ship, the biggest one to ponykind yet and say that they want to have her officially name it. And on the go the major could give her a tour and show her that the city changed a good chunk on the way, but was able to keep its rustic charm.
Just an idea though.

Dragon

Arcanist Ascendant

Arcanist Ascendant #4 · Jun 22nd, 2014 · 2 · ·

Seeing the skyline in the picture hurt. I used to be able to see that late afternoon shine off of those buildings out of my bedroom window. Not anymore.

Great story.

NobleValor

NobleValor #5 · Jun 25th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Good writing style. However, I'm of the opinion that you could expand on this a great deal (namely why the Sunset ponies don't like outsiders and what Celestia's connection to Twilight Village in more specified terms). Looking forward to more (I say hopefully ).