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After an ancient relic triggers and accidently sends Twilight Sparkle thousands of years into the future, the unlucky unicorn must find a way to survive. To do that, she will need to forge new friendships with ponies and their human allies while helping them fight an evil, unknown enemy. Twilight will have to find courage to survive in this new universe and maybe learn something new about friendship during her journey across the Milky Way galaxy.







Disclaimer: I don't own My Little Pony; that is Hasbro’s. This is a fan fiction only. Comments are appreciated. I also would like to thank my editor, alis_volat_propriis, for helping me edit this.

Chapters (20)
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UUUHHH FIRST! :facehoof:

I. Love. This. Story! :rainbowkiss: :raritywink: :pinkiegasp: :yay:

The whole thing makes me think of Halo for some reason.

One side note, the names of ships are always italicized or underlined.

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I never knew that. Thanks! I will update that as soon as I can.

Ouch.

Oh technical note, the sun isn't a white dwarf, it's a G class main sequence star that isn't a binary star (orbited by another star); it can't go nova. I'll suspend my disbelief at how Humanity forced a relatively small star to go supernova.

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Yeah I know that. But I have seen a few interesting theories where artificially igniting our sun might be feasible. I don't want to ruin the mystery behind it so I don't want to explain.

So, to clarify, is Earth actually gone? Or do they just not know where it is?

So the tech used is destroyed along with the people who created it. intern because the technology is now lost you don't have to explain anything about how it works. plus the fact of the people created decided not to let anyone know about what they did you can get away with it this way

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This. Plus I think it adds an aura of mystery behind it.

Oooohh! Title reminds me of Two Steps From Hell.

Nitpick time: Try to get into the habit of writing 'yeah' instead of 'yea'. :trollestia:

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I was inspired by that very song the first time I heard it.


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Thanks! I want to give any readers the best possible story I can.

Sir, you make absolutely awesome story. One of the best HiE fanfic I ever read.
And I want MOAR!!! :flutterrage:

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Thank you very much! I really appreciate that a lot!
I hope I can keep the quality of this HiE as high as possible.

I don't mind it being late, I'm following thirty-odd stories and I get a good dose of euphoria each time every one of them are updated.:pinkiehappy:

Another exciting round of Space Hulk!

This story is awesome and deserves more attention. It's about time we got another good space opera around here.

How does this 254 views and zero comments?

Oh wait.

10 bucks says the new ship is theirs.

A story where humanity was nearly wiped out, and it wasn't our fault? No stupid self-destruction? It was because of a race of chaotic evil douchebags?

Yessssssssssssssssssssssssss.....

YEEES! YEEEEEEEEES!!! UPDATE!!! I'm so happy!
And damn, this was a great chapter. This whole scene with gas giant. Simply majestic.
Heh, I can't wait when Twilight "see" a black hole. Or supernova.

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Heh, definitely.

Squeeeeee! New chapter! YES!!!
Hehe, I wonder what crazy adventures awaits them in this Midnight City (BTW, this is a name of planet or largest city on surface?)

Why the hell this story don't have more favs/comments/likes?!

Ah yes, David Drake-esque military science fiction.

I love this story.

One thing, you wrote "informatory". Think you meam to say "infirmary".

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Thanks!
Midnight City is just the city name, but it is a massive city as you will see!


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Dangit! Yes, that's what I meant to say. Fixed, and thank you!

I happen to be a sci-fi buff (and author of my own sci-fi fanfic, of course, but that's not the point.) and I've got to say, the lack of reaction to this story is disappointing, but not all-to unexpected to me. Good sci-fi stories are often overlooked, just like this one. It's not perfect, but a far as sci-fi goes in the fimfic community, I'd say it's a worthwhile read.

Keep up the good work, and pony on.

449755 My guess is that it was either blown to bits or, thanks to the "wonders" of human tech and all the pollutents it produces, we made it inhosipidable (spelling fail).

Epic battle scene.

It made me think of Halo.

But anyways, I love the David Weber style space opera atmosphere.

And now things get interesting:trixieshiftright::rainbowlaugh:

2829097Yeah, this played out very similar to the confrontation between our heroes and the rebels in Halo: First Strike (3 book in the halo series, takes place before halo 2 but after combat evolved:twilightsmile:)
Keep up the good work, I will be watching from the shadows:rainbowdetermined2:

Pretty quick update. And as usual, a great chapter.

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Gosh, I didn't even notice the similarities. That is a good book series
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As always, I appreciate it everyone!

Well, this was a pretty interesting chapter:twilightsmile:
Keep up the good work, I will be watching from the shadows:rainbowdetermined2:

I must admit, that I like this Deval Aldridge character. Even if he is a criminal, at least he is intelligent one. Plus, he is badass as far I can tell.

So, Twilight is the last hope? Again? I hope that you are not try to tell me that EoH will be destroying the whole fleets with Magic of Freindship.

Isamu Zhang met the frightened unicorn’s wandering gaze. “Twilight Sparkle, you are a smart pony and I know you will figure it out. You are still the Element of Magic. Do not ever doubt that. We will cross each hurdle, one at a time.”

“He is right, Twilight. You’re here now and there is nothing that can stop you.” Socket Wrench beamed her sunny smile at the lavender pony.

THIS is something that annoy me very much in lots of fimfics.
"Twilight, you are the egghead so you can handle it"
"Twilight, my faithful student, I trust you absolutely so it's obvious that you can handle it"
"Twilight, you are Twilight so everything will be OK"
etc, etc, etc.
I want see at least ONE story, where everyone trust her, she thinks everything will be OK because everyone trust her and then she fail horribly.

" This incited another round of laughs but Socket walked over and patted Twilight on her side. “It means you would be walking around naked, sweetheart.” Twilight’s face blushed red and her ears drooped in embarrassment. "

Don't really see why she would be embarrassed by this.

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In the future that Twilight was transported to, it has become part of the culture to wear clothes at all times. I mentioned it in one of the earlier chapters.

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I've had the entire plot-line of this story thought out for months now. The hardest part is just finding time to write and edit everything. I have some exciting action planned and I don't want to spoil anything but I hope you stick with the story because I think you will enjoy what's coming up.

And yes. Deval is a badass.

3006045 This is true, but I don't think she'd blush in embarrassment, since while it may be the cultural norm in the current time period, she is used to the opposite.

Ooh, interesting.

I love the worldbuilding you undertook, space opera and now a slight touch of cyberpunk.

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By this time in the story, Twilight has been fully immersed in the culture of the United Equestrian Nations for weeks. I don't think it's a stretch to say that she would feel somewhat embarrassed for breaking a cultural norm. It was just a small joke made at Twilight's expense.

Sepia Tock, why did you leave your hourglasses around for anyone to mess with?

Oh joy. I guess jumping through the rift in desperation isn't going to happen soon? And that Corona and Nebula are important, aren't they?

Hey, is Twilight fast enough to catch grenades and toss 'em back?

You know, if you changed one letter on the Dranen, you get Draven. This, is the planet of DRAVEN

Midnight City, Midnight City. Sounds Asian for some reason.
I'm suddenly wondering how Twilight would react if the ship's AI was based off of Rainbow Dash.

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