613 the prophet had been on many adventures with his best friend Avi, visiting new worlds, befriending the people there and offering them a place in the most amazing multi-universal community ever. Now, with the knowledge of Equestria's existence, the two friends travel to the pony-populated world, where they make new friends and discover new things. But, like before, something is out to stop them. A dark force, one which has been plaguing them since they met, has followed the prophet and his friend into Equestria. Their objective: disrupt 613's mission and proceed to strew entropy and destruction of every kind throughout Equestria.
With their new friends, new forms and new identities, Spirit and Fang are going to see if they have what it takes to protect what they care about most. Will the combined power of the two Republicans and the Mane Six be enough to repel the forces of darkness? Or will they have to tap into an old resource to help them out?
very interesting plot. i am intrigued to see where this goes.
Thank you. I've been waiting for somepony to say something like that
4372286 you are quite welcome.
While the story had many mistakes, It was still overall a great story. Personally I think that both of them losing their prophetic powers all at once was kinda... unneeded. Personally you should have given avi one of his cards. and allow 613 to still have connections to his father and god, even though he no longer has his other powers
doing this would give both of them a drive to regain their lost powers, as well as save equestria from a great threat.
I'm not done yet. There's more to this story than meets the eye. Unfortunately I've been working on a second story at the same time, so I've been trying to balance out the amount of time I spend on each
This seems pretty good so far, ignore the dislikes those are just grammar nazis
Yuppers ! Ignore The Downvoters !
Make more please ! I Like it so far.
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Pinkie pie Smile HD.-
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This is really good so far.
*looks at comments*
Looks like the Chronic Troll Disliker attacked again
Is it alright if I ask what this is crossing over with?
4914678 Yes, yes it is alright. Although I was reserving that for the chapter after the next
4914732 Alright
Functionality kind of sounds like an anime that I watched.
Not bad.
Not bad, it's good to get an update.
5420144 It's a pleasure to update
5420243 random question, have you heard about Artem Yegorov?
5420248 Ehhhh, I'm gonna have to say no.
Why?
5420314 He is just a good musician. [youtube=27XBU7OuFCY] Tell me what you think of it.
5420327 Nice
Not something I would jump for joy about, but it's pleasing
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