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Crystal Bombshell


I'm just your average brony... Who happens to be transgender (MTF) and lesbian... So yeah. I do write, and I love editing! If you need an editor, just drop me a message!

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Twilight and company are getting a new game: Blade Shield Online. Created by Assateague, the game is on the cutting edge of full-dive virtual reality. What everypony doesn't know, can't hurt them, right?

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Big thanks to Twidashforever for editing and prereading!
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This IS a crossover between the anime Sword Art Online, and MLP. This is also my first multi-chapter fic, so if there are any recommendations with pacing, themes of either show, etc, feel free to mention them. Also, the first chapter takes place in canon Equestria. Only when they get in-game do they become anthro. The style of anthro can be found here.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 30 )

Okay, I'll stick with this. Though I have to say, no romance tag? That's a pretty big part of SAO.

4337200 I was going to add it later, after I introduce the idea. I just didn't think it appropriate at this point.

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*Cough* Twiluna *Cough* The romance in the story is very important. It's part of the message saying that no matter what you do in life, it is real. Kirito's isolation to protect himself is also very important to the romance aspect. I'm curious how you will set this up. Unless you are only somewhat basing this story off SAO. I suppose Luna could be Kirito, because of her isolation on the moon and Twilight being her only friend. It would make sense if she were a solo player. Excluding Twilight *Cough* Love interest *Cough*

Ya, I would go ahead and add the romance tag. Even if there isn't any now it lets everyone know it's coming later.

No romance!? Idk...

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There you go. Now people will stop pointing that out.

oh my goodness! A fanfiction that combines SAO and MLP?!?! I must be dreaming. Apparently not as I just threw myself off my bunk bed and didn't wake up. Dang that hurt. Anyhooo I am so excited for the next chapter! Hope it doesn't come too much later!

4338973 Depending on how life goes, it might be quick, or it might be long. I'm going to try to get the new chapters out in a timely manner (I know how fun it is to be waiting for an update).

This could get real interesting. I wonder how Twi and her friends'll do in BSO?

Blade Shield Online?!

HAVE ALL MY YESH!!

By the way...is their going to be a Season 2? The Gun Gaia Online or something like that? It's the new version of SAO, but with guns!

Other than that, didn't have to read the story! Just take a Fav since. I love SAO so much!

4340421 There's supposed to be season 2 released sometime this year, and what you're thinking of is Gun Gale Online.

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when you find out, let me know!

4340421 I just checked, and season 2 is out. You can find episodes here.

4347082 So they do. I didn't think to click on them. Guess that's what I get for assuming.

Well, you've certainly got me interested with this one. Although I'm not a really big fan of human-technology-in-equestria stories.
Oh well, I bet it's just a small part of the story. I hope you'll update soon! :twilightsmile:

4362429 I'm going to release a chapter on how they came up with the anthro part. (it's canon with the comics)

I'm interested, but every one keeps calling it BSO, am I the only one who laughed at that?

a few of the paragraphs still need to be tabbed or untabb the ones you tabbed. (all or nothing)

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Yep

one last thing, this paragraph has an errant space in it.

Fluttershy noticed that she still had her wings and rear hooves, which allowed her to calm down somewhat. Which was good, as she was just about to succumb to the semi-imminent panic attack, Fluttershy saw Twilight yelling and waving her hands above her head.
She decided to simply fly over there, as she was unsure how to walk on two legs. Twilight was about to shout for her not to try it when Fluttershy leapt into the air, to which they all closed their eyes, looked away, and waited for the sharp scream of pain. To their infinite surprise, that scream never came; instead, Fluttershy was slowly making her way over to them, and appeared to be mostly stable in the air.

it happens to me when I accidentally hit enter when I did not mean too.

Otherwise, good job! I look forward to the combat lessons with Twi and Luna!

Side note, are you sure you want to remove the tabs? I only ask because you put them in Chapter 1.

there is a button that tabs all your paragraphs for you (just double-check to make sure it did not do anything stupid after).

Applejack completely overhauled her appearance, though; she had a light grey coat, bright gold eyes, and a blackish brown mane, all on a pegasus’s lithe but sturdy frame; she had named herself Ajax.

Ajax, popular Dutch football club. Oh the coïncidence. :yay:

Welcome to the SAO: Remastered group! It's pretty much exactly what the title says. Woohoo, you get a virtual first-story-to-be-added-to-the-SAO:Remastered-group congratulations! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

“Ah yes. A Miss Rainbow Dash, correct?”

I think the NPC should refer to her by her username, not her real name.

Also, will this version allow respawns? If not, I think Assateague forgot to mention it.

I'm sorry for the DownVote, but this is too similar to the original SAO story, with barely enough adjustments to incorporate a My Little Pony aspect. Yes, I'm judging off the first chapter, but...the first chapter often says a lot about the whole of the story.

6308480 it's no problem. :twilightsmile: I've been dealing with a bunch of stuff irl, so I haven't had much of a chance to actually sit down and write. Otherwise, I'd have changed a ton of stuff from the original SAO to match the mlp universe more. ^~^

she heard somepony shout ‘You’re not a girl!’ followed by ‘You’re not 16!’

Best part of episode one!!

This was fun, too bad you don't continue it

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