Elegance, grace, beauty. These are words ponies often use to describe Ponyville's resident dress maker, Rarity. One who could be inspired by the smallest detail and create something of beauty from nothing. She was known all throughout Equestria for her skills with a needle and thread, and her social skills as well.
None knew her secret life. One of sensual lust. Her social status didn't just limit itself to garden parties, after all, and a large portion of it was in private. Any stallion in Rarity's circle could get a call anytime, and when Rarity calls, "no" is not an answer. Tonight however, it was a little different. She wanted something new, something fresh, and the stallion walking next to her was just the thing she wanted.
Rarity was going for the classic "I'm too drunk to function" act, stumbling and slurring her words, but in reality it was only that-an act. She wanted to be sober for this.
The stallion next to her was thinking something different. He saw a poor, helpless, drunk mare, and he was a gentlecolt. He wouldn't do anything to her, he was just making sure she got home okay. As they approached the door to her home, he noticed a change in her. She was suddenly much better at walking, spoke more clearly, and made on thing perfectly clear.
She would get what she wanted from him.
The door opened and he was forced inside, Rarity slammed it shut and locked it before dragging the helpless stallion up the stairs by his tail. She whispered to him, all the dirty things they would do. If it wern't for the magic bubble around him he would have screamed.
Rarity would have her way, and this stallion would be added to her circle.
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Also, nicely done!
Can you put a link to the clop version?
4555480 if there WAS a clop version!
4555498 You should write one, then.
I would
masturead it.4555506 ... maybe some other time...
Whoa ... this kinda caught me off-guard. For one, I expected Fluttershy to be lust, if nothing else than the sheer number of fics where she goes into heat and goes all "You are going to BUCK me" on sundry stallions. And speaking of "Best Night Ever", I imagine Blueblood is the only stallion to ever turn Rarity down/escape her clutches. Also, Date-rapist!Rarity is surprisingly believable, and I half expect this to become a meme.
4556776 Yeah, I'm much more proud of this chapter than the original one I had written. That one was... straight up the worst thing I had ever written. This isn't much better on a moral standpoint, but the execution is a million times better.
4557043 Yeah, this does seem like something that's rather hard to pull off correctly, though in the end, the subtle dark humor came out perfectly.
Owe you?! You have deprived an eager audience of one more fetishistic delight!
4861877 I don't write clop, this was the closest thing to clop I have ever written, and I feel dirty and ashamed because of it. You owe me for mental trauma, I'll see you in court!
4864367 I know the feel. I passed that close from clop once, too
But I must admit I would read the clop version of this fic.