Itty-Bitty 2: Revenge of the Tiny

by gallagsp the corgi

Gluttony (Sins Week)

Sugarcube corner was normally a friendly place in ponyville to get a sweet treat and meet with friends. Today, however, it was a place of dread and terror. Some pony was terrorizing the place, creating chaos in a regularly peaceful setting.

The pony ate everything in sight. All the cakes, all the pies, (the desserts, not the ponies, though I wouldn't put it past her.) all the cookies and cupcakes, everything went down the gullet of this beast. There was no end in sight.

A brief moment of relaxation went through the building as the beast stopped for a minute, only to release a large belch that rattled the building. A hearty laugh followed, then the sickening slurping as the beast continued to eat.

How could a beast like this swallow so much, ingest so much food and not grow in size? Was there a bottomless pit into the very depths of tartarus in its stomach? Perhaps it had a lighting-fast metabolism. All anypony knew was that it had showed up and started eating three days ago. It hadn't slept, it hadn't stopped for anything. It just ate.

Mr. Cake walked up to the beast. "Pinkie Pie, your break is over, you need to stop eating and get back to work."

"Sorry, Mr. Cake!" Pinkie replied, jumping up from the table and snatching one last cupcake with her unnaturally long tongue.

Author's Note:

Here we go, the first "Specials Week" of Itty-Bitty 2!

What inspired this? Well I did something over the four horsemen, so I figure I'd continue the biblical number theme.

Also, I've been playing a ton of Binding of Isaac, so that also helped a bit. I'd like to write a crossover fic about it but I'm not sure if my plan would actually work out that well.

Comments

[QPaysTaxes]

Nice. Very, very nice.

[Firemind]

Yeesh, does Pinkie have a tame black hole for a digestive system or something? Half expected Mr Cake to grab her tongue when she went to get the last cupcake.

Are you gonna keep the sins to the Mane Six plus Spike, or are you gonna have princesses and crusaders embodying them too? Luna as Envy, perhaps? Either way, this was awesome.

[gallagsp the corgi]

4551229 Its going to be mane 6+ Spike. I'm not too proud of tommorow's chapter, mostly because I couldn't really make it work for the sin itself, but hopefully the rest will be better.

And thanks for the compliment!

[Firemind]

4551251 Eh, you have chapters like that; especially with themed vignettes like this. Still, I look forward to how it comes out.