The inhabitants of the land Equestria were amazed of what landed in their fair town of Ponyville. Humans and pirates no less with their massive ship known as the Thousand Sunny, now that the Straw-hat crew led by Monkey D. Luffy (a man who ate the cursed the Gum-Gum Fruit), Twilight Sparkle felt like she had an obligation to both start introducing themselves and send a letter to Princess Celestia to inform her of the situation.
Meanwhile in the background, a hyper excited aquamarine colored unicorn, is completely being up in her face to her best friend; any-who back to story!
“*ahem* My name is Twilight Sparkle, personal student to Princess Celestia and bearer of the element of magic, it a great pleasure to meet you ‘people’”
“That’s a bit to formal Twi, I’m Spike, a baby dragon and her assistant” as the purple dragon spoke.
“A dragon huh? Hey Zoro, do you think this dragon is related to the one you killed!?”
“I don’t think so, that thing was red and pretty stupid, this little thing is too cute.”
Spike merely cowerd in fear to the mere though that these people were able to take down one of the most ferocious creatures of the land, but being able to take down a dragon caught the interest of one very shy Pegasus.
“I-I’m Fluttershy, so you people must be really strong?”
“Yeah, that’s right! We take on a ton of strong people!” Luffy exclaimed.
“We’ll you fashion sense sure suggests it, I’m Rarity I’ll find a way to make you look FABULOUS!!”
“At least we’ll get a change of clothes in this world” Nami said.
“So if you’re strong that means you’re fast, I’m Rainbow Dash, the fastest Pegasus in all of Equestria!!
“We’ll then, I’ll be sure to challenge you to a race, I’m known to be fastest swimmer in the East Blue!” as Usopp boasted.
"HI! I'm Pinkie Pie, do you like parties? Do they have parties over in your would? OHHH what do like to eat? How about cake, hot dogs?" as the pink pony rambled on
Robin could only laugh as the crew at least tries to understand the pink pony's speed talk.
“Easy there partner, we don’t want to be reckless! I’m Applejack, it’s pleasure to meet y’all!”
“We’ll then now that the formalities are done, we should be expecting the princess pretty soon!” as Twilight said.
“Princess?” asked Nami.
“Yes our land is ruled by 2 princesses, one controls the Sun and the other the Moon…”
“And we came as soon as we received your letter my faithful student!”
Everyone gasped as the sister princesses themselves had arrived to assess the situation, and being royalty they’ve arrived by chariot. Princess Celestia of the Sun and Day & Princess Luna of the Moon and Night had came!
“SOO COOOL!!!!” with Luffy’s eyes sparkle.
“So these are the ancient race of human that you described in your letter, I must say they look strange but fun!” exclaimed the alicorn princess of the sun.
“But, something on my mind since we just got here .” Luffy questioned.
“And what’s that….Luffy is it?” asked Luna.
“*in thought* don’t you dare ask Luffy” Nami thought.
“Do you guys poop?” Luffy asked.
Everyone gasped in sight couldn’t believe what this person just asked, and in front of the princess for that matter. With everyone’s faces quickly blushing at the shear sound of that last word. Twilight’s mind is currently processing such a vulgar question, but can’t help but wonder can the god –like rulers of Equestria use the bathroom like any other pony. And it was Celestia who first answered next to her blushing sister.
“Well actually we…..” Celestia attempted to answer but…
“NO WE DON’T OUR FOOD IS USED FOR ENERGY TO HELP LIFT THE SUN AND MOON!” as Luna rudely interrupted.
Celestia raised an eyebrow as if she were instinctively said to her sister “did you seriously just said that”
"Oops, heh heh, we are sorry" apologized Luna.
However Luffy, the idiot that he is simply made a huge smile and simply said:
“Oh, okay!”
“*sigh* Luffy you can be just a big idiot sometimes” Sanji sighed.
“However … EVEN IN PONY FORM, THESE ARE BEAUTIFUL LADIES!!!!” kneels before the princesses and holding up their hooves “It's pleasure to meet you, your majesties”
“Oh don’t worry about it! As long as you’re not a threat it’s fine by me” Celestia proclaimed.
However, hidden in a bush, a creature with insect like eyes watches from a distance of the events occurring before it.
“Humans!” and it simply flies away with insect wings all excited to tell the news to its superior
“Her majesty is gonna love this… love them soooo much~ !”
To be continued…
I like it so far. the concept is rarely done in my opinion.
I don't see much problems in grammar, so that's good. I recommend putting more info or small details to really bring out the story in your vision. I also like how everything is going too, I hope to see some interesting things happening soon.
I would bet Ussop could challenge Rainbow Dash maybe, i mean he was running away from more enemies than any Character i know at the moment
Did Pinkie Pie say *gulp* hot dogs?
the fuck is with sanji
if the unicorn you are referring to is lyra then you must be colorblind she is mint green.
uhg luffy
I actually do have to call you out on this one. When Luffy asked "Do you poop?" to Brook, it made sense because he was a skeleton and did not look like he was capable of taking a shit. That does not apply here. The princesses obviously look capable of pooping. The only reason that I am not pissed at you or Luffy is that bit with Luna.
(a man who ate the accursed Gum-Gum Fruit)