An average brony "finds" an abandoned pony and gets less than he bargained for.
(No disrespect intended to ROBCakeran53's original story.)
Why did I have to open the box?
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How could you do such a thing? *Cries.*
Eh, it's not any worse than Cupcakes.
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Cupcakes was actually entertaining.
This is not.
What... Did I just read.
4324794 do we always have to find each other on here?!
I guess y'all wouldn't like my story where Derpy is killed off, either.
"Awwww shit! Did I just squished someone?" SWAG.MOV reference.
Also same reaction as 4324794
4324863 Speaking of PONY.MOV, I'm still not at quite that level of insanity.
4324863
This is the first comment by you that I have ever seen that doesn't contain an ad for your story.
Well, that was... something... I guess. I would critique it, mostly about the pacing, but I'm pretty sure that my original version has the same problems lol.
4324912
This is....awkward.... (Sorry for trolling your story...
....I'll see myself out...)
I dont mean to sound absolutely sadistic, but this guy took a good spin on a classic fanfic. What everyone needs to realize is not everything goes how it needs to. i know the original MLD ended sadly, but it was expected...from the beginning. This guy's rendition should be a refresher. MLP, and even this fandom in general isnt just crazy stories and wacky ponies. People die and kill themselves over their bronydom. My best friend had to suffer his fate. He was thrown into a ditch and left to die; his killers never succeeded as he died on impact. The ditch was 20 feet deep, there was no way he was going to live through that. Before everyone starts hating, maybe everyone should take some good advice. Just saying.
How the hell did this even get one dislike, let alone 13? This is right up there with the RD Presents version. Don't let the gore haters keep you down, this was perfect. The only thing I'd recommend is adding a comedy tag.
4324973 You turned a "suck it up" comment into a "my friend is dead" comment for no reason whatsoever.
4324934
Naw, you're fine. I rather enjoy reading these kinds of things parodying my fic. It lets me know that my crummy writing was worth someone else's time to make fun of.
4325138 No. It's a "Suck it up. I've been through shit.You've been through shit. I recovered. You can too." comment.
4325211
But it wasn't even called for in the first place.
Just when I was running low on nightmare fuel...
Well written, and well-conceived. I chose 'like', even though I'm kind of sorry I read it.
4325348 I agree with you. It wasn't called for. I just don't like people complaining that a story was made into a sad side-story in which the otherwise lead supporting character dies. There are sadder and more twisted and sick stories than this one; why not complain about those? Just giving some perspective is all I'm doing.
4325348 But hey. If there's more to argue, I'm all for debating comments with the guy who wrote the fanfic that inspired this and this, not to mention countless side fanfics.
4326849
Hot damn, you're so edgy.
4324973
Pretty sure this would have been all over the news--getting thrown to your death in a 20 foot deep ditch for liking ponies is a pretty newsworthy thing, after all. Therefore, I must conclude that you are making this up because you want to sound hardcore, which you do not. You sound like a thirteen year old who just discovered that cutting yourself makes people pay more attention to you than not cutting yourself. In summary, stop being a faggot.
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Well, you did write what became the Citizen Kane of MLP fics.
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[9:57:33 AM] Columbine Public Flasher: apparently
[9:57:44 AM] Columbine Public Flasher: My Little Dashie is "the Citizen Kane of MLP fics"
[9:58:03 AM] Columbine Public Flasher: Rob can I quote you making vomiting noises after seeing that statement
4332032
What's with the time stamps and "columbine public flasher"?
4332851
It was an excerpt from a skype chat, dear.
4332858
You addressed it to me.
I... I don't know how to react to this story...
4445187 Then I've done my job.
I can only react in pony images
4513148
Then allow me to respond.
4445187 Same here... I just don't have any words. All I can really say is that I am sad and really angry at this story.
5418130 Sorry, I didn't know it would have that kind of effect...
Well........................I'm gobsmacked stupid.....................
5800768 Yeah...this old story...I was feeling trollish when I wrote it.
5802139 Evidently so.
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Wow, Celestia is quite calm. . . Too calm. Ok who is the real one? The way too calm one
or the other Celestia who was pissed as hell
KYS!!!!!