• Member Since 1st Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen May 16th, 2018

Frost Wing


Nothing amazing just your everyday brony that watch and learns.

Comments ( 29 )

"Yes Mr. Snuffer it does suck dick to go to a school without bronys."

Dafuq?

Got to agree with Poster 1 on this kinda a crappy way to start your story
sorry

D.G

always love a good laugh. wish my stories can make people laugh :raritydespair:

I doubt it is a troll fic, I have read quite a few of MrHappyFaces' fics.... so I am quite sure this is not a troll fic....

On a side note, that cat just talked.......:yay:

This is a pretty interesting story. I really like where it's going!
Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

Tracked! Seems pretty interesting!

yaaay interesting need moar soon please.

he should slam her to the ground and shave her cutie mark off! hope you keep writing.

Sounds very interesting...

B***h slap her..... dooooo iiiiiiiit.......:moustache:

Like the continuation, S*** is definitely going to go down!
Also, a bit of constructive criticism, please proof-read your chapters before sending them out.
I mean it's fine, it's just that seeing the grammatical errors here and there tend to mess with me after a while.
But overall good story, please continue! :pinkiehappy:
Also hope any issues in your family can be resolved quickly and without consequence. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Bad punctuation, bad grammar, bad writing.

Um I try first time man I'll try my best okay>>491332. :rainbowkiss:

THE CAT CONSIPIRACIES ARE TRUE!!!! 0.0 Hply shit.

RIP OUT HER HEART AND STICK IT UP HER ARSE!!!! Simply for originality.

He didn't need to sleep at all that day.....:moustache:

wohoo best chapter ever. it is so well writen and there are no gramaticle mistakes. i love the way you wrote out that part about Sugar Cube Corner. :scootangel:

603115 ooohhhh shit sorry man pressed the wrong button :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

i knew somepony would use this idea

dude are you gonna continue it? it's been like almost 5 months......please i liked it :fluttercry: :applecry :pinkiesad2:

finally, but short chapter is short, good enough though. :trixieshiftleft:
i dont have an oc so i cant help you there :derpytongue2:

... Would it be okay with you if I edited this story for you? For free?

It's a very good story, but I have found two things wrong.
1 sometimes the spelling/grammar is bad enough that I have difficulty understanding what you're trying to say, no offense
2 you swear in this a little TOO much. I feel that it's a sign of a bad character if his/ her main character trait is that "he swears a lot"
Love it otherwise!
Your reader
MD

I feel it would be wise to flip DT and SS in the classroom scene, due to the personalities matching better that way.

OC
Name: dark shine
Race: unicorn
Gender: you pick
Summary of character: dark shine is the same age as Scott/twister, and delights in using magic to fuel his/her dark sense of humor. However, he/she can be serious when needs be. Also has a black cat named miasma.

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