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"Yes Mr. Snuffer it does suck dick to go to a school without bronys."
Dafuq?
Got to agree with Poster 1 on this kinda a crappy way to start your story
sorry
D.G
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always love a good laugh. wish my stories can make people laugh
401513 trust me. it's not
I doubt it is a troll fic, I have read quite a few of MrHappyFaces' fics.... so I am quite sure this is not a troll fic....
On a side note, that cat just talked.......
This is a pretty interesting story. I really like where it's going!
Keep up the good work
Tracked! Seems pretty interesting!
yaaay interesting need moar soon please.
he should slam her to the ground and shave her cutie mark off! hope you keep writing.
Sounds very interesting...
B***h slap her..... dooooo iiiiiiiit.......
Like the continuation, S*** is definitely going to go down!
Also, a bit of constructive criticism, please proof-read your chapters before sending them out.
I mean it's fine, it's just that seeing the grammatical errors here and there tend to mess with me after a while.
But overall good story, please continue!
Also hope any issues in your family can be resolved quickly and without consequence.
Bad punctuation, bad grammar, bad writing.
Um I try first time man I'll try my best okay>>491332.
THE CAT CONSIPIRACIES ARE TRUE!!!! 0.0 Hply shit.
RIP OUT HER HEART AND STICK IT UP HER ARSE!!!! Simply for originality.
He didn't need to sleep at all that day.....
[url=MOO]seems legit
wohoo best chapter ever. it is so well writen and there are no gramaticle mistakes. i love the way you wrote out that part about Sugar Cube Corner.
603115 ooohhhh shit sorry man pressed the wrong button
603132 lol its k.
i knew somepony would use this idea
dude are you gonna continue it? it's been like almost 5 months......please i liked it :applecry
finally, but short chapter is short, good enough though.
i dont have an oc so i cant help you there
... Would it be okay with you if I edited this story for you? For free?
It's a very good story, but I have found two things wrong.
1 sometimes the spelling/grammar is bad enough that I have difficulty understanding what you're trying to say, no offense
2 you swear in this a little TOO much. I feel that it's a sign of a bad character if his/ her main character trait is that "he swears a lot"
Love it otherwise!
Your reader
MD
I feel it would be wise to flip DT and SS in the classroom scene, due to the personalities matching better that way.
OC
Name: dark shine
Race: unicorn
Gender: you pick
Summary of character: dark shine is the same age as Scott/twister, and delights in using magic to fuel his/her dark sense of humor. However, he/she can be serious when needs be. Also has a black cat named miasma.