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I'm Rubyist. I'm not a writer by trade, but it's fun enough, so I figured I'd write some fics in my spare time. I may crosspost on /mlp/ under the name Ruby.

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I'm a bit of an introvert myself, but I'm pretty sure masturbating in someone else's house that you just met an hour ago is not considered normal social behaviour in any culture I've ever heard of. He couldn't even have the decency to go to the bathroom first?

As you'll recall, he's injured, enough that Fluttershy had told him not to get up out of bed. When one is bored and bed-bound, sometimes bad ideas may get the best of one's self. Also, bad decisions make great plot devices.

Indeed. Bad decisions are what made most of the episodes in the show anyway.

Beside what anon did just before chapter end, the rest of this story is quite good, i particularly like how twilight is suffering under pressure, fit her character far better then in many other stories:twistnerd:

RD too need time to recover from a crash, inexplicably in other stories she just insta-heal, and done:rainbowhuh:

In conclusion this story is turning out pretty well, just...why anon has too..that? Why?:twilightoops:

"I don't condone beastiality. Do not replicate this at home"

Well, my whole day just cleared up

Your own team paid to WANK PUBLICLY

He's not a monster, but he is a human male without "companionship"

The tone whip-lashed right at the end there.

but you do have my attention.

This is the flutterrape story I've been waiting for.

Oiy, ya know, the endings to these are always awkward. Interesting to read, but awkward. Also :

Please do not try to duplicate either Anon or Fluttershy's actions at home.

I will masturbate in my bed all I please good sir! It's what its there for! :pinkiehappy:

But yeah, I really liked Twilight in this chapter, damn anon makes alot of leaps when it comes to fluttershy, from the ending it sounds like he's right though. The plot is umm...well, its been done alot, but you write it so well and interesting that this story feels in no way to just be about clop, and I really like that about it.

“Oh, um... good afternoon Anon. Youwouldn’thappentohaveafetishforalicornswouldyou?”

I'm really interested in hearing Fluttershy's reason for thinking that.

MOAR! :flutterrage:

But seriously- Anon. You better not be TOO hard to get. Flutters might get discouraged and move on... or tie you up and force you into it...:pinkiecrazy:

Probably because he bonds/bonded well with Twilight.

Holy moley, I'm liking this a lot. Haha, such a hard left turn a the end there!

You decide to skip the bullshit.

I love you for that.

I think she saw Anon give Lyra a hornjob.

But seriously- Anon. You better not be TOO hard to get. Flutters might get discouraged and move on... or tie you up and force you into it.

I think think that's the point; this was tagged as a "Flutterrape" story in the description.

Even so, this was still very hawt. Although, even think of extending this, so Flutters gives Anon a real blowjob, he blows once, then she rides him cowgirl (cowpony?) style?

The Ride never ends.


Okay, third time seeing this mess in the last hour. Could someone tell me what the hell this guy's trying to do or is he just an annoying trollbot?

It's a good fix I say keep it going

Please continue i realy think you should keep this thing going i have enjoyed it so far i think i could call it a work of art it is alot better than most of the other storys that i have read i would be sad if this ended:rainbowkiss::scootangel::yay::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::raritywink::twilightsmile::trollestia::rainbowkiss:


Well then, I'll just have to make things a little interesting.

10 out of 10, will definitely read again!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

bad habits area hard to break

Should be

bad habits are hard to break

Otherwise, interesting story so far.
It's nice that it's not just a bunch of gratuitous clop.

Grammar nazi here... again.
Still loving the story, but here's a couple of things that drove me bat shit crazy.

I’ve got on clue.

Should be

I’ve got no clue.

If you hadn’t known that it was obviously impractical to make the roof out of gingerbread and icing the upstairs room out of a cupcake

Should be

If you hadn’t known that it was obviously impractical to make the roof out of gingerbread and icing and/or the upstairs room out of a cupcake

Either of those will work, honestly.

whether it might just be better to just wander off into the Everfree

So much JUSTice. Remove one of the two. Either one will suffice.


Thanks, I've taken those changes into account. I try to keep my story grammatically correct for the most part, but a few typos sometimes seem to slip in anyways.

You are anon.

No, I'm not.

Doesn't Mr. silly slender man know that Lyra will still be his friend and depended on what equestria he's in will either befriend, rape, torture, mutilate, eviscerate, devour or lock him in the basement, either way it works out.

Lyra is one of the cootest ponies how anyone could brush off her friendship as weird has now 30 seconds to live. This is approved by the Holy Inquisition and The Medic.

I wa so happy for anon to have a friend and stuff.....and then he fucking jerks it in front of fluttershy's animal friends in her house on her spare bed fully naked..... What the fuck man...

This is the second time anon has been with a pony naked......what the fuck dood? I'm so jelly right now :ajbemused:

Come on Anon everyone knows that you don't jerk off in your friends home.... unless you know their schedule.:raritywink:

Dude, halfway through the Anon/shy dialog, you started making paragraphs where both speak. That ain't no bueno. Separate them perspective changes!

“Get out.” There was a low fury in her voice. “I never want to see you or your kind again. You are worse than changelings.”

This is definitely something the Princess of Friendship would say, and not at all a blatant mischaracterization. :trixieshiftright:

He's doing pretty damn good, for someone who just got mauled by a bear the previous day.

Able to walk around town all day, able to withstand a tackle-hug from Pinkie, able to give a handjob to a unicorn, and even good enough to think he can go to a party later the same day.

I dunno, you'd think someone who was bleeding enough for it to be seen from outside his bandages would be a bit more lethargic at least.

It's a damn shame that this hasn't updated in a while, or that you haven't logged in in a while...

This is probably one of the better Flutterrape stories I've read. It was a great read so far, and I'm hoping for a slim chance that it'll update someday.

Thanks for the story.

In someone else’s home Anonymous?...

For shame. :facehoof:

Tell the person wrote this story has left website for years so the story can probably be considered dead hopefully someone else will pick it up and finish it

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