It's a good fix I say keep it going

Please continue i realy think you should keep this thing going i have enjoyed it so far i think i could call it a work of art it is alot better than most of the other storys that i have read i would be sad if this ended

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Well then, I'll just have to make things a little interesting.

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10 out of 10, will definitely read again!

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Thanks, I've taken those changes into account. I try to keep my story grammatically correct for the most part, but a few typos sometimes seem to slip in anyways.

You are anon.

No, I'm not.

Lyra is second best pony.

It's a damn shame that this hasn't updated in a while, or that you haven't logged in in a while...

This is probably one of the better Flutterrape stories I've read. It was a great read so far, and I'm hoping for a slim chance that it'll update someday.

Thanks for the story.

Tell the person wrote this story has left website for years so the story can probably be considered dead hopefully someone else will pick it up and finish it