Shining Armor and Cadence had just expelled the evil Queen Chrysalis from Canterlot after nearly destroying their wedding, but not before Chrysalis successfully planted a spell on Twilight. As the last remaining changeling alive in Equestria, Chrysalis must depend on that single spell alone to win Twilight's love and ultimately ensure the survival of the changeling race. Meanwhile, Twilight finds herself often thinking of Chrysalis more than she would feel comfortable with. Can Chrysalis truly win over the heart of Twilight?
credit to Soarin2013 for editing.
Chapters (3)
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Chrysalis and twilight is best shipping,
Whatever they like to admit or not.
They like eachother
Here is my question. in your story, is Chrysalis origionally in love with Twilight or is it the spell she cast, that is causing the feelings between the two?
also it feels as if you're rushing things take you're time and ease into the ship, maybe have a few scenes when they finally meet up where they work at a relationship that doesn't automatically involve "hi", "hi" *kiss* just a bit of advice.
Anthro huh... great I'm starting to think this might be worthwhile and nice to see I'm not the only one to see chrysalis is not the heartless monster she was made out to be. And yes I am aware of that comic arc. I just see the mlp comics as a slightly alternate reality to the show in other words just a branched timeline. And now I have an idea on how to get chrysalis as a member of a gundam fighter team for my little build fighters.
4381857 im going to write it later, but in the story, chrysalis has already "met" twilight and is in love with her, twilight isnt already in love with her. i will explain the spell in a later chapter.
4381353 totally agree
The potential for the story is their, I feel that its aliitle rushed and just stuffed together. Otherwise so far I will fav it just so I can keep track of it
4382579 thank, hope i wont disapiont.
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WHEN IS GOING UPDATE,SIR
4392109 when i get a chance to write...im not totally sure of the story atm...im know the start and end, just not the jurney.
ok...so im taking a bit of an extended break from my writing to get an understanding of how to make it better. to do that im going to read a few stories that were sugested to me by a few friends. they told me that they are well writen and that i could learn somthing if i payed attention to the way they run. the story im on now(if you would like to know where im at for the moment is Vinyn and Octavia: University days. if you havent read it, im told its supposed to be really good. if you have then you know what im talking about. hopfully after this exercise i can come back to writing with something better to give you.
PS- thanks for all the faves and likes, it gives me a reason to want to be and work better
thanks
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Great story dude
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4637503 thanks
Sorry about not updating recently. My laptop is out ofq commission for the moment. When I get it fixed I will get on finishing the next chapter so I can post it for your enjoyment. Please bear with me in this. Thank you for waiting and I appreciate all your continued favoritsing.
Sugar not suger.
A lot of mistakes no spaces or lack of capital letters etc
5318560 its un edited at this moment. i typed it up on my phone. i havent had a chance on a computer in a while. when i do, i can do all the editing.
Any one willing to help with next chapter, message me...I have a little bit written, but I still have no way to editing with it as my pc is still broken...I will need some one willing to give an email so I can send what I have and have it looked over while I continue working...thanks.
To those waiting for the next update, im getting a new laptop next month so I can go back to working on this story for you all.
5317058 5318560 thank you...I will edit when I get a chance as I am currently using a cellphone to view and reply.
Vampyr-pony is having some legal problems so who knows if he'll ever finish the story
6006631 yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
when is the next chapter?