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Hustlin Tom


Just a simple guy who likes to write and stumbled into this strange but wonderful fandom.

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This story was written as a parody of the events involved with the Season 3 finale, Magical Mystery Cure. Because if Twilight gets to be an alicorn in the canon, why can't I make anypony an alicorn?

Besides, you know who needs more attention? Big Macintosh.

On the day this idea was brewed up, a strange and altogether surreal story was created, and many laughs were had in the writing. Enjoy!

Cover image belongs to Onnanoko, and can be bought on Redbubble.com for shirts, cards, etc.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 23 )

That was so good and random. Great job. You give pinkie a run for her money.

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Heh, yeah. I'm amazed at some of the weird crap that comes out of my head sometimes. Thanks for the compliment!

"The Princess Big Mac cometh
Behold, behold
The Princess is
The Princess is here!"

:eeyup:

(Ah...happy BABScon memories XD)

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It makes me sad that I don't have a chance to go to any form of Brony conventions.:pinkiesad2:

Oh what wonderful shenanigans I'm sure are had there.

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I myself cannot attend any as well actually. :twilightblush:

You'll find some panels on Youtube though. :twilightsmile:

Haha, best dream ever - Profit Margins!

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Fear not Gustauve! It may be on the backburner right now, but I still do have the sequel you requested in mind. It may be a while, but I will finish what I promised!

Heheh, interesting. :pinkiesmile:

Ah, now you got me wanting a serious take on the concept... Complete with Mac awkwardly wondering if he's supposed to be friend, family, or lover to the princesses.

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Oh dear. Well, unfortunately, that's not going to be a story I'm going to write. If you want to though, nobody can stop you!

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Thanks! I strive to provide 'interesting' stories.:derpytongue2:

Great story, needs more. Sequel , pls.

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I've been requested to do one, and while it may take a while, I do plan to do one!

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Ach, nien - Lass dir Zeit.
I am in no rush to see it.
I'm currently working on a story of my own, so I'm not in a rush.

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Oooooh? You pique my interest sir! What is this story of yours about?

That is the best possible result.

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Shenanigans are always the best option in a story. Bar none.

This review is brought to you on behalf of the group: Authors Helping Authors
Name of Story: Of Big Mac and Alicorns

Grammar 9/10 or 10/10 not too sure with this fanfic :facehoof:

Pros
It was hilariously random! What more needs to be said?

Cons
Might want to have tagged it random...
Big Mac seems just a a touch out of character at times (too much talking)

Notes Section
Can I just say that I went 'what the...!?!' more then once. I got so lost(in a good way)

Enjoy your review! Please help me out by looking at: The Last Keeper of Harmony

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Thanks for the review! I really appreciate your input. I'll do my best to do a review of your story as soon as possible.

I wish it had gone a little bit more indepth on that conversation about 'profit margins', especially if Celestia drops innuendos and Big Mac doesn't clue in for a bit.

Then after Nightmare Moon and Celestia get in a fight, if Luna decides to drop in on Mac's dream and sees that.

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Drat! You're right! There could have been so many things I could have put in for a good innuendo! Oh well. I try to leave stories as they were when first published, aside from re-proofreading and one or two Orwellian retcons. I've been meaning to do a sequel to this for ages, but I've never gotten enough ideas together to get it off the ground. That would probably be where I'd stick Luna's reactions in!

Hilarious!
I would've liked to read more!
:twilightsmile:

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I'm glad you've enjoyed what's here! Unfortunately I've come to find that writing good humor takes a lot out of me, and I've moved on to other projects. Hopefully there are other funny stories out there starring our favorite big red earth pony you can enjoy!

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