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After eight years of schooling in Canterlot, Twilight Sparkle and Spike, her best friend and High School drop-out, move to Ponyville. But things have changed since Twilight was last there. Her friends wont tell her what it is, but something is off about Applejack. She seems different and distant. There's a sadness in her eyes that Twilight has never seen, and she wants to get to the bottom of it.

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http://indiron.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-Sparkle-385409194

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 55 )

Definitely added to read later. I need to see a little more than a prologue before I start digging in.
While I'm waiting, may I have a source to that amazing cover art of yours? I want to go high-five the artist.

veeeeeeery interesting so far.... waiting for more! :twilightsmile:

Keep up the good work; I like it!

-Mr. Discord

4307890 Thanks a lot Mr. Discord, I hope to have chapter two up soon

4307906

You a very welcome! :pinkiehappy:

Wait, did Twilight forget about Rainbow Dash?

Well fuck. Dash is a childhood friend of AJ's, died before AJ and Twi became friends? Or was a childhood crush of AJ's, or abopted sister? AJ is also somehow tangentally responsible for Dash's death.

4315973 Ooh you actually just guessed one of my original ideas. It's close but not exactly. We'll see in due time. :scootangel:

good read! cant wait to find whats in store for twily and the gang :derpyderp2::derpytongue2::derpyderp1::pinkiecrazy:

4316707 -sticks out tongue- meanie makin me wait!

4316888 Don't worry, I don't plan on making you wait long :derpytongue2:

4316936 -shrugs- Its all do to me readin too damned fast. I burn through actual novels in record time, and well I consume fanfiction

4316945 Same here, which is why I took to writing. It takes longer to write than to read.

4316951 -blushes- Nope, I find myself unable to slow the fuck down when I write too. :ajsleepy: It shows in my stories..

4316953 Ah I see. Yea I've had that problem myself with writing on another site.

4316957 Still, I'm enjoying this thus far.

4316961 Thanks, it means a lot

4316965 Everyone should know they have atleast one fan

Rainbow Dash is gone? I don't know what to say.

Called it! completely wrong.. :derpytongue2:

4317307 :rainbowkiss: she's still in our hearts

4331395 Hope you like the direction I went.

4332025 Nah, its cool. I like me some AppleDash. Sad it when kaputz before we ever saw it. Thought marraige for highschool... :derpytongue2:

4332177 It wasn't high school. It was two years after high school, but I probably didn't make that clear. Twilight has been gone for 8 years and RD passed 2 years ago, so during twilys 2nd year of college more or less.

4332184 Thanks, still young as all hell. -grins- Though I'd imagine both AJ and Dash doing it that quick

4332190 Exactly! And I bet a few people are a bit upset about the apple-dash stuff being..well...killed off, so I think I'll do a prequel, showing everything Rarity didn't say.

4332204 Its up to you. Honestly some of the best world building comes from not telling us the whole story. Let the characters themselves color it in. AJ sad over her being gone, Rarity being all romantic about it, Pinkie finding it fun, Fluttershy being the closest to the whole truth due to her growing up around Dash..

4332213 I'm still juggling with the idea honestly. My original plan was to make a short apple-dash story with lots of cute moments, you can see what happened with that :rainbowlaugh:

4332220 Ahh mutation the mother of evolution..

I still don't know what to say about Rainbow Dash's death.

Aw cute sparity :twilightsmile:

4340161 Thanks! It's been a while since I've written any romance scenes, glad to see some one likes it. :twilightsmile:

Woo! Go Spike! -coughs- Don't get greedy kid..

4377672 Not sure if legitimately confused, or participating with the characters. :rainbowhuh:

4380867 Participating. I couldn't help it.

4383156 You get extra points for class participation :twilightsmile:

and she wants to get to the bottom of it.

Quite literally? :pinkiehappy:

Great ending to the story. I realy enjoyed it. BTW Prologue is the intro to a story, Epilogue is the ending.

4394072 I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for pointing that out, idk how i messed that up.

Comment posted by Banshee deleted May 31st, 2014

she knew she couldn't just live it that way.

I think you meant to say leave.

for the coat and scarf that hang from the door.

hang should be hung.

Twilight paid Spikes way since his hands were full.

you forgot the apostrophe in Spike's, and way should be rewritten as fare.

The library was Twilights main hotspot

you forgot the apostrophe in Twilight's,

although a bit bigger than the thought it would have been

you probably meant to say she instead of the,

Yea we should go to Fluttershys house and have a party! Or Raritys

you forgot the apostrophe in Fluttershy's and Rarity's,

saw a sign with the farms name in the distance.

you forgot the apostrophe in farm's,

Hows the family by the way?

you forgot the apostrophe in farm's,

Twilight, who also noticed how the farm-girls eyes

you forgot the apostrophe in farm-girl's,

feeling a bit of the anger from Applejacks tone.

you forgot the apostrophe in Applejack's,

She walked right up the the stone

you probably meant to write to.

One typo in the last paragraph I think. Applejack put her hands in her pockets and a small on her face I assume you meant "small smile"

What does the letter says? Now I want to... no, I need to know!:flutterrage: XD

4499605 I was wondering when someone would ask me that. Hmm, maybe it will be in the prequel? :scootangel:

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