• Member Since 6th Dec, 2012
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ShadowBrony


Just a simple writer living in the shadows.

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Its been a long time since Twilight had written a letter to Celestia. So much had happened. So much that Twilight felt it would be good to contact her old mentor and tell her just what had been going on since they last talked. But for some reason, this letter feels different then any other sent. This one, seems like the most hardest one she has ever had to write.

(Art taken from this video)

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Comments ( 13 )

This needs to be featured, it's depressing as hell but other people need to read this.

This makes me so sad...but I love it so much. Good job! :pinkiesmile::fluttercry:

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Thanks, I normally don't do sad fics so it is nice to hear I did alright.:twilightsmile:

Huh. That was... calling it nice would make sound sadistic, so I'm going to go for sad. It was a good sad story.

4318312 Thanks for taking the time to read this man. Means a lot.:twilightsmile:

That was very sad but great to read. :fluttercry: :twilightsmile:

hmmm you should have a chapter where celestia gets the letter and her reactions and goes to her or sends a letter back. without that, this story didn't really do it for me.
but still an up vote.

Thanks, I actually have been considering a sequel though it will be awhile before I can get around to it.:twilightsmile:

A good story, but it didn't quite feel complete. You put forth this view of Twilight, but nothing changed. It's a slice of her life I suppose, but I felt you didn't have anything to say about it. There was no resolving chord. Has Twilight been left behind? What does friendship mean anymore? Is this how Twilight will feel forever? Or is this a crucible after which Twilight will come back a stronger person? The answer might be yes, it might be no--but this story raises the question and posits no answer. So it feels incomplete.

4465922 That's because I am planning on sequel. I just haven't been able to get to it yet. I am currently working on finishing up a world in Road to Twilight. Once that is finished, I plan on coming back to this.:twilightsmile:

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