• Member Since 27th Apr, 2014
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Blood Inc

I am just some guy who likes to write fanfiction, nothing much.


Rarity's life turns upside-down after her incident with the "Inspiration Manifestation" book Spike found in the old castle. A much more sinister force appears to be behind it as she starts to drift away from her reality and her friends...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

This is alright, and I'm going to check back and see how it develops. My only qualm is the colored text (Not mentioning that you missed a bit of Rarity's dialogue in your coloring endeavors). It's a tad distracting.

4301223 Ah, I see... Thank you for pointing that out and, well... I'm too lazy to undo that. I'll just fix the Rarity dialogue and, well... I'll refrain from doing this anymore. Thank you for the feedback.

I'm just trying to be unique, that is all. But if it is bothering people, I'll stop it.

Hello! So far I'm pleased with this story and I'm interested to see where it goes.

If nothing else, I give it bonus points for making Rarity, Spike, and Discord all the main focuses. That's awesome! :pinkiehappy:

For some odd reason, I've always been interested in seeing Rarity interact with Discord. And it seems like this story might provide that.

But I do have a question, do you have any intentions of having Rarity and Spike hooking up?


Thank you for the feedback. It means much.

As for Rarity and Spike hooking up... Hmmm, I'll see how the story goes and if it would fit in.

4315719 Ok, that's perfectly understandable. Do whatever you feel it right...even as I hope they will hook up. :twilightsheepish:

Nice new chapter! Discord was awesome, as always. And it looks like Rarity is going down the same path as Sombra. I can't wait to see more whenever there is more! :pinkiehappy:

Well, it is dark magic after all. It will obviously have side effects similar to those that Sombra experienced.

And thanks for the feedback, as always.

"Once you start down the dark path, forever will it dominate your destiny." -Yoda-

4328568 - Perhaps that Tome 'o Dark Magicks belonged to Sombra, and was hidden away after his defeat? Could have been what turned him evil in the first place.

Please excuse the shortness of the first few chapters.

Please keep it this way, I'd rather read many short chapters than a few long chapters.

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