The year is 4000X, and a brilliant mind known as Dr. Celestia creates six robotic mares in the hopes of creating peace and harmony until a sinister mind known as Dr. Discord takes the mares and uses them to create chaos around the globe. Dr. Celestia creates one more mare in the hopes she can stop the evil doctor and stop her mares gone rogue. She named her Mega Mare.
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BWA-HA-HA!! This is going to be GOOD!!!
Heh-he, I mean the Mane 6 as the Robot Masters. Priceless indeed.
I cannot wait to see how this all turns out. Oh, can you make Mega Mare Not talk in this story, because I am definetly feeling a Classic Sonic vibe from this pony.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale idea like this one.
28489 Thank you good sir!!!
My friend and I will continue writing this until it's ran it's course.
To answer your question: Yes will try to make Mega Mare silent but she's like Master Chief only saying usually one line per chapter.
Manly she'll talk whenever she first meets Dr. Discord or when she's talking to Dr. Celestia.
Eeeyup, that seemes like it will turn out great!
But I mustache you a question,
If this continues to go along, how will you incorperate the dissapearing blocks, because if you dont, i'll have to not love you anymore
otherwise, Keep it up! it'l be so great!
28548 Thanks man!
The disappearing tiles will appear in Dr. Discords castle since you know the tiles don't make any sense and Discord makes no sense so....
It's even better with Mega Mare slient.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline.
29136 Thanks man!! Will try to improve as it goes on.
Also, do you think I should explain nuclear winter?
If Rarity is involved with Nuclear WInter, then by all means...please do so.
I think each pony should represent a type of element with Applejack being Earth, Fluttershy being nature, Rarity is Ice, Rainbow Dash is wind.
However, with Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle, they can be in their own elelments of suprise (in the form of a party with Gummy being a mini-boss) and magic repsectivly.
Still please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.
29235 I just explained nuclear winter.
Also I have three things I must ask you.
1.Do you mind if I use the element thing and gummy as a mini boss?
2.Do you want to be pre-reader?
3.Sorry to sound needy but do you mind recommending this to some people?
Okey this caught my eye being a Megaman fan. First of as said before. Megaman1 in Equestria using the mane six... Genius! I mean. Its like the game was made to have a FiM fanfic writen for it... I wonder though. How is this series gonna continue once the first 'game' is completed. Is that gonna be the end or are you gonna continue along with the story?
Oh and is there gonna be a Roll or? I know shes mainly in the background but still might aswell ask about it ^^
29818 Maybe, maybe not.
Glad to see you like it!
Manly because me and my friend will be working on Spike Pilgrim V.S Equesrtia next!!!
Also, sorry to sound like a view whore do you mind telling this to other Mega Man/MLP fans about this?
29863 That maybe was for continuing this series or to leave as one 'game' with the mane six and defeating Dr. Discord.
Great, been a fan of the Mega Man series when they first came out (sheesh, am Ishowing some age
) Any chance we'll see mega man's sister Roll and his dog Rush?
29992 Great to see you like it!!
We might put in Roll or Rush but we haven't decided yet.
29343
While I would love to be a pre-reader to this storyline, I would have to say no as I too, am currently working on my own MLP:FIM crossover with a video game superstar. In this case it's Sonic the Hedgehog and the story is entitled "Sonic Rainboom Redux."
However I will do my best to spread the word about this fan-fic.
Also if it's possible maybe you could add in other characters in the form of mini bosses, like the Cutie Mark Crusaders in mini bosses in the worlds of Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity. Big Mac being a mini boss in Applejack's level assisting his little sisters, Spike as a big mini boss in Twilight's level, Gummy a mini boss in Pinkie Pie's level and even Angel Bunny a mini boss in Fluttershy's level.
I mean go all out with such a crossover storyline like this one. This could truly be an enjoyable one.
Honesty Mare should be up in a couple of days.
EPIC-NESS!!!!!
That felt just like a Mega-man Level indeed and If I know little Applebloom, I can tell you're planning to use all three members of the Cutie Mark Crusaders in a similar way to Proto-man in the Mega Man series.
Very clever idea of yours indeed.
Also the
cameo, that was just too much of a good laugh.
However, my one complaint was how quick the fight between the Honesty mare turned out. As I have always felt that if Applejack were a boss fight, I would have thought "Apple bucking" would be involved.
I mean such a power like that can assist Mega-mare into finding hidden pathways.
Yet, this chapter was truly worth the wait as the level was a great read.
I wonder which Element is next for Mega-mare to face ?
And if there will be some assistance to the Element in question ?
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as this one has potential.
38972 At the end of the chapter is says that Mega Mare got Honesty Mare's strength. So she could probably apple buck the carp out of enemies now.
Still, thank you for commenting!
You know now that I mentioned it in my review I think I do have an idea or two of how to make some of the Elements use their "Special" talents as weapons/powers....
I mean with
you have her Apple bucking power and her strength
Still it is a suggestiong to use within future chapters of this storyline. Whatever you do it is up to you and I Would bet would enjoy it all the way.
38997 I'll think about doing that, so thank you for the idea!
Also, the next mare is going to be Laughter Mare.
39003 Wait............ In part 2 of the pilot did Fluttershy find out what her Element was first or Pinkie?
39003
If it is Pinkie's Turn the in the next chapter...then I can only wish you good luck on this one given Pinkie's attitude and actions. I mean with the whole 4th wall and her cartoon-style ways.
Also don't forget my suggestion about that Gummy mini-boss, which would be easy since he is a baby Aligator.
39078
Well based upon the wiki on the show it is Fluttershy who earns her element purpose next, then it's Pinkie's turn.
Also, if you're going to do Fluttershy, I cannot wait to see whether or not Angel Bunny will make an appearance in the chapter.
39110 Then my friend and I should do Kindness Mare first than Laughter Mare! One of those two shall be next!
I almost feel sorry for the Eds given the way their schemes seem to backfire on them. Also, can you have a moment where Ed with one D, meets Scootaloo and calls her a chicken.
Nice idea to sepearate things for a while. Still I wish you and your partnerthe best upon such great ideas like this one.
40832 Thank you! I hope your story goes well too!
Sorry this took so long and I hope you enjoy!
Please, any constructive criticism will be appreciated.
I Truly LOVE THIS STORY!!!
I mean the mini-fight with Angel and that usage of "the Stare." Just true genius in this tale of yours. :D
Pelase do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as I cannot wait to see how you do with...
.
Hope you enjoy this new chapter! Sorry if it took like four months maybe more.
HA, now this chapter was worth the wait as it a was Fully Pinkie Pie all the way. Especially the whole "Party Cannon" thing.
Once again, nice job on this chapter of the storyline. I can't wait to see how you do Rarity's part next.
686823 Thanks. It's good to know I have at least one fan to write for.
You guys are lucky with two chapters in the same week!
Anyway, I hope you enjoy this chapter.
Great update and nice usage of Opal and Sweetie Belle in this chapter.
I love Rarity's power up in this chapter and the usage of the infamous Party Cannon in this chapter.
Now I have a few questions for the next chapter...
1. Will Tank the tortoise be involved in the next fight ?
2. How will you do Scootaloo's involvement in the fight with Rainbow Dash, given that Scootaloo can't fly ?
3. In the upcoming Fight with Twilight Sparkle, will Spike and Owlicious be used in the fight ?
Nice update overall as I cannot wait for the epic fight with the Loyalty Mare.
695659
1. I'll try to, because we need more Tank.
2. I can find a way, trust me.
3. Spike will most likely be used as a Metool, while Owilicious will be a mini boss (I hope)
Hope that answers your questions.
hmm, party cannon sounds like it would be an awesome weapon. and the stare seems to work like a time stop power.
cant wait to see how mega uses the gem shield.
699766 Thanks!
I'm up for the job. I love to read stories and will help to the best of my ability. I'm online almost everyday and have helped popular stories before in ideas.
720203 You've got the job! Fun fact: I submitted it to EQD and it got shot down.
"I made this to help earth ponies get to destinations quicker than before, but I kept one for myself.
"When I first made the mares I put a tracking chip so I could find them just in case they broke loose.
"Now I programed the teleporter to take me where ever the mares are located.
"This is going to take you to the closest one: Honesty Mare.
"It should be a linear path after you beat her, but she is tough and so is this journey, but I have faith in you young one.
1 - 5. All missing your closing quotation marks. Also for the third sentence, did you reaaly mean for Celestia saying that the teleporter would take MegaMare or herself to where the others are located?
These trees were went for the actual ponies
The barn had a bunch of hay, barrels of the explosive verity, and a few bright red apples which didn't carry gun barrels.
"Thank you for saving me from my prison.
"This will grant you the power to have my strength.
"But be warned. When you use it you lose some power. So only use it when you need to"
1. Meant.
2. Variety.
3 & 4. Forgot your closing quotation mark.
5. Forgot your comma before your closing quotation mark.
OBJECTION!! Its Ed, Edd and Eddy! Not the first 2 ,mixed up!
The trees just seemed to absorb the blow as she stood their stunned.
She felt a siring pain as she backflipped away from the monster and turned around and raised her hind legs.
The bunny then proceeded to bear it's teeth showing fangs that could tear through a battleship like it was nothing.
You got to be kidding me!
She tried to raise her bust, but she found out she couldn't.
She flinched, but regained her composer and opened her soul piercing eyes.
"That this."
1. There.
2. Saring.
3. Bare.
4. My preference is You've. But meh that's just me.
5. Didn't know she had a bust.
6. Composure.
7. Take.
Sweet Celestia some of these mistakes made me
but meh. You said to bring it right?
A orange portal appeared with a very quiet screech as Mega Mare stepped out of it.
“Okay,,, first you need to be looking at your target.”
“Oh! You're here! You're here!” it yelled, approaching Mega Mare and extending a hoof “My name's Laughter Mare, and I made this party just for you!”
She decided to put on the butterfly necklace and tried to use the stare ,and to her surprise, it worked.
1. An.
2. ...
3. A repeat line.
How could it do that?
The cat tried to make another strike put was put down by her hoof as she shot one last blast at it, effectively destroying it.
1. Forgot to italicise this sentence.
2. But.
725836 After all of those derpy mistakes, what did you think of the story itself?
726068 I think... honestly... I do not really know. The characters fit in, yes they do. The flow of the story... is alright but i'm not too sure...
Overall;
Will there be more of this?
966295 Yes, but I just need to finish a bunch of stuff that I have planned like a new chapter for one of my stories and a one-shot I'm writing.
I clicked this because I saw the image of Discord in a lab coat and a gigantic mustache. please do not disappoint.
hahahaha, at first I thought Applebloom had come back when it said "It was yellow with a blood red mane"
I like the music
This looks awesome.Can't wait to read it!