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TheShadowOfZama


Greetings everybody! I am a new writer who tries to create some amusement. I enjoy writing and reading stories, if you enjoy my stories give them some support and join the shadow army (=my followers).

Comments ( 21 )

Is this an 'Army of two' cross-over? I can only guess cause of the cover you picked.

we like this so far may thou continue

4300402 No, it isn't an army of two crossover I picked the picture 1st because I liked it. 2nd because the masks will become important later on in the story.

Well regardless I like it please continue

Ok this is really good please continue!

Huh, I wasn't sure about this story at first, but so far, I'm liking where it's going.

4300467 Thank thee we art pleased to hear that thou enjoys our story.


4323548 Thanks a lot for both of your comments. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well.

This is good, I like some changes in stories (or in the atmostphere?) everynow and then and this story is it. Sure it's a HiE but, at least it is slightly different.
Please continue...
I don't expect masterpeice or anything...
:moustache:

Love it keep her going! Please

4348160 Well thank you for your kind words. I don't expect a masterpiece either. I just try to write an enjoyable story and if it manages to become a masterpiece well that would certainly be a bonus, but a good story is all I ask for at the current time. I hope you will keep on reading.


4348283 New chap is up. I hope you keep reading and reviewing as well.


4349205 No worries good sir we will get you a defibrillator as soon as possible! okay, back to being serious. Please read the Authors note on the bottom of chapter 4 it is stupid of me to retype the message in this review in it I explain uhm my grammar problem to give it a name. I however hope you keep on reading the story and keep on reviewing.

GOOD GOOOD WRITE MORE THIS PLEASES ME

You need to work on your run-on sentences. Know where to a period and for the love of God, know where to put your commas. This is mainly just my concern as no one else really cares about 'em.

Did... Did you copywrite someone's fic?

I think you did.

4388719 I admit I use elements from existing things by example the infected are based on those of the upcoming game Dying light. Telling what the masks are for would be a spoiler, but let's just say they are not going to stay in Canterlot and they're going to do some stuff. I admit though that I use certain aspects of certain existing stories don't know if that counts as copywrite I don't think it does as I create with those aspect own situations etc.

I can however guarantee you that I would never copy someone's story entirely or even in big parts perhaps use certain aspects like way of entry and perhaps meeting with the mane six, but much more not that is something I promise you.

Justice has been served!

If Rainbow doesn't ease up soon she gonna get a punch in the muzzle, but I'm gonna laugh and laugh and laugh.

“haha you have funny words I mean what does fuck actually mean I bet it’s something fun and nice FUCK. That party was so fuck! I love it FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK!” :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: omfg thats so f***ing funny

jävla I need to see globoid get his passed kicked

These are awesome!!
Please tell me you'll be making more chapters

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