If you didn't know him, you might think Chocolate Oats has it made. Successful artist, married to one of Equestria's top models, loaded with cash and a grand house ... who wouldn't want to be him? You might be surprised to find how tempting a shot at a different life would be to Coco himself.
If he took off the mask, you'd find out that the two of you just might be more alike than you'd think.
This is, in no uncertain terms, a story about life.
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I remember reading this, and I'm glad you posted it. I'm curious to see where you take this.
and since you asked me to proof-read, I did. The wording looks fine, though I admit I'll have to reread it when I'm not half-asleep
I did notice one thing
"I said they were akinto them, not that they were hippos"
needs a space between 'akin' and 'to'.
Other than that, looks good, sounds good to me
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Thanks, Wordie! :3
Taken care of~
I like the directions you're taking this. The importance of father figures is underrated. But yipes, I hope Coco can handle Azure AND Lily!
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Thank you and amen!