23 year old Yegor Baryshev and his friends Makar Zheleznov and Sergei Rakossovsky are flying from Moscow to Vladivostok for Christmas vacation. Makar's father had owned a cabin outside of the East Russian city and had left it to his son when he passed away so Makar invited his two best friends to spend their holiday break there. On the flight there however, the plane gets caught in a storm over Siberia causing both engines to flame out and the plane to crash. The three young men are somehow the only survivors having been in the very back corner of the plane. They find themselves in Siberia near a town known as Noril'sk which they enter in hopes of finding food and shelter. Unfortunately for them, the town is deserted. But what's really strange is that the town seems to have been abandoned yesterday. Something fishy is going on, and Yegor and his friends are determined to find out what...
Rated teen for profane language and gore tag added for dead bodies as well as slight blood and gore to come later.
Ponies do not appear till chapter 4!
4350942 defiantly? You mean definately, right?
Interesting Premise, will definately read
Hum... so far, it is interesting, but structure wise, it is a little messy. For example, I do not know when this
is supposed to have happened. When you say that, is it because it happened to the protagonist three days ago? But it doesn't seem like it would be logical with the rest of the events. Is it happening to someone else? Nah, surely not, this is a first person pov. Or did you mean that everything else happened three days ago and this is now? This is just a weird transition to me. And "previously mentioned Siberian town"... Why not just drop the name? This is just making me question myself more.
Also, while I'm on the topic of easily fixed mistakes, you have a few instances of "your" for "you're" or vice versa. Like:
. It should be It's and you're.
Two chapters in though, and I am indeed intrigued. So that is a big plus.
Hum... now I see some of the effect you were going for. It does indeed clear up previous problems, but it's still somewhat clumsy.
Oh, and a few typos here and there. Off the top of my head,
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Oh, and plot thickens. Nice.
Not sure I buy the threat level. One pony, versus humanity? Starting in Siberia? Well, even then, unless everyone converted is magically forced to obey...
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That's what is going to happen, isn't it?
This does have the making of a suspense thriller, got the atmosphere of those virus outbreaks down with the previous chapters, you spent at least some time on the characters, so yeah, I'll be looking forward for the rest.
*reads final paragraph of fourth chapter*
Well, that escalated quickly.
Now I want to do something like this
And I just posted a new story
Will the Russian Army come in at any point?
4352473 Only if there is enough Vodka to go around.
4351346 Thanks for the comments. I fixed the errors you pointed out. I will state that I do not have an editor and my ability to revise my own writing is mediocre at best.
I hope the conversion fails, or at the very least that it leaves most of him human.
Whatever happened to this? It was a good concept
6766806 I'm still working on it but I've lost a lot of the free time I used to have. I'll see about finishing the next chapter soon.
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Wow, i.... um... i actually didnt expect you to say you were still working on it. I mean its been well over a year and a half since this last updated
Taco r u still working on this