The mane Six reflect on their friendship
Like a neglected and dejected pup, I roam. Also known as Swimmingly "Herr Direktor" Choppingston.
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This was actually kind of funny. It wasn't bad. But PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE get a proofreader. There are so many errors in here it hurts my eyes.
6 out of 10.
Meh
Actually entertaining, but like Sparkers16 said:
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Proof reading would of been needed. But other than that it was a nice short read...
pretty good yet re read before posting is my advice but a REALLY GOOD read nonetheless!