• Member Since 11th Jul, 2011
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Lychee


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Things between Celestia and Luna are getting worse than ever, with both Princesses unable to reconcile their guilt over the events surrounding Luna's banishment. With the leadership of Equestria fraying, outside forces long forgotten by the subjects of the sun and moon take the opportunity to settle an old score.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 4 )

This is a really interesting fic and I look forward to reading more very soon!^_^

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I feared after the first chapter that this story would be kinda lame, but things have really fleshed out. Other alicorns governing the seasons is a premise that I was initially wary of, but with the whole backstory, especially the death of Spring Rain, you've proven you're a competent enough planner and plotter that you can handle it. And the characters I've seen so far have a lot of depth, in particular Snow Drift but also (somewhat surprizingly) Winter Chill.

One question now looms larger than the rest, in my mind: What does Dead Leaves want with Zecora's book of zebra magick? :twilightoops:

I hope you plan on continuing this story, it really is great. I can't quite understand why despite being on ED there's not a lot of support or feedback here for it. Cheers!

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