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Pteri


Hello, everypony! Not much to say about me. I love writing stories about anything, and especially love ponies!

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Sparkler loved her daddy. While mommy worked, daddy played. He made her smile, laugh, and enjoy even the simplest things in life. Yes, Sparkler was happy. With a mommy who is a beautiful princess, and a daddy who knows how to make her smile, what more could she ask for? Life was perfect... Until other fillies at her school tell her just how awful her and her daddy were.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 216 )
Comment posted by Pyriel deleted Apr 26th, 2014

Good story. Faved, liked, and given best wishes.

Cute! But I fear what is coming for Sparkler. . . :twilightoops:

4295010 I don't think I've ever seen TPR however Skeeter the Lurker. Man he's everywhere.

4295675 I've seen Skeeter the Lurker a few times.

Great story idea, it seems good so far... take a thumb and a star to the face xD

Oh, dear…

You've already got the tear damn cracking just from worry for this adorable little girl! :fluttercry:

Well check out 'dem feels and we're only one chapter in.....

we have decided its best for you to start school tomorrow. We know you've been home schooled for two years, but... Its good to try something new."

OOOOoooo this is gonna end well...
soooo well. So well in fact, that there wouldn't be enough water to fill all those wells. that's how well this will turn out.

Wait... where was I going with that? Uh, never mind. Anyway, Interesting story so far, I'm looking forward to the rest! :moustache:
Now, let's see how much my heart can take before it gives out due to "Feel Overdose", shall we? :ajsmug:

I look forward to seeing how this goes. I also look forward to the next chapter, alot!:twilightsmile:

And if daddy listened to mommy, she would to.

*too

I feel like you too are always going up against me

*two

"Sweetie, we have something to tell you." Mommy said.

*should be a comma

Its good to try something new.

*It's

Sparkler's pretty quick if she can catch a mouse like that. It's a good thing she's so well-tempered; a rebellious child with that kind of energy would cause all sorts of trouble.

And what a wonderful, happy day this was before things start to go downhill.

4298435 Oh, thanks! Didn't realize I missed those when I triple checked the story to see if I missed anything when I double checked the story.:twilightsheepish: (:rainbowhuh:)

I'll fix them real quick:pinkiesmile:

Man I'm getting feels from this story already. I can't wait until you actually get to the sad stuff.

I like.
True Facts.
Not only like
but are interested.

4299791 Thanks so much!! Btw, I notice your Jayfeather icon and Lionblaze username... I approve:moustache:

4300176 Another Warriors fan eh? Not often you find those.

4300271 I know! That's why I get so excited when I find another. :yay:

4300382

Warriors? :trixieshiftright:
WARRIORS, you say?
I happen to be a fan :scootangel::scootangel::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

4300796

Ohhh :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
Thanks!!:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::raritywink::raritywink:
*murmurs under breath* Hm, should I make one of the main six (Nightmareized) as my icon instead?:trixieshiftright::duck::trixieshiftright::duck:

4300877 you should! :pinkiehappy:
just don't do Fluttershy or I'll cut you:pinkiecrazy:

adorable, leaves me wanting to hear more about this lil' cutie. i thought the disagreement about parenting styles between discord and celestia was very believable and well done.

one thing that could use a bit of clarification is were in the show timeline this is supposed to be happening. with celestia and discord being immortal, this could take place anywhere from a decade to a thousand years after his second release from stone.

4301351 Yep! I purposely made it so it wasn't obvious when it took place. It'll be clear soon though :twilightsmile: Just wait til the next chapter! And thank you so much. :pinkiehappy:

4300914

Okay!!

I'm starting to like doing this itty bitty note, don't mind me... :scootangel:

Edit: I like Nightmare Twilight Sparkle

Let me go over the list.
First ingredient, one adorable filly. Check!
Second ingredient, related to Discord. Check! Bonus flavor for also being related to Celestia.
Third ingredient, a school in the middle of what could only be described as an army of Diamond Tiaras. Check!
Mix well and you receive a delicious bowl of Feels and Excitement Stew with a hint of Spicy Hatred. Well my fellow readers, bottoms up!

So.. does Equestria have a Darwin Award program?

Because bullying the daughter of the God of Chaos and the Goddess of the Sun(who is also an absolute monarch) seems like a quick way to die. Horribly. Actually, death might be a sweet release from what Discord would do to anyone who hurt his little Princess.

4305735 That sounds like a quite tantalizing mixture.... I shall read on! :yay:

What I want to know is exactly what... intimate moments (if you know what I mean... I'm trying to keep it "Everyone" rated...)... are supposed to be like between Celestia and Discord...

I absolutely LUV being drawn into a story with the first few lines. Love this so far, gonna keep reading :derpyderp1:

NEED MORE!!!!!!!!
GREAT STORY!!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Comment posted by MIKEANTHONY321 deleted Apr 30th, 2014

I approve. A little background on how and why Discord and Celestia got married would be nice, but aside from that, it's pretty cool.

Calling it now; if this is continued, Discord is going to have to smack a filly for making fun of his daughter.

4313824 Oh, don't worry. That's coming :pinkiesmile:

But, all you ponies must await the next chapter :trollestia:

Now where is that Diamond Tiara clone? :trixieshiftright:

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!? :raritycry: :raritydespair:

2D

>mother is princess of equestria
>father is a god of chaos
>little girls have serious balls
>bully her because of her dad
>little girls not afraid of monarchistic/divine intervention
>k.avi

4323212 No matter who your parents are, if your slightly different, ponies are going to push you down Sombra's stairs.

4300271 I love Warriors! Though with honesty, I've only read the 1st six.

They inspired me to write a novella.

Love this! Can't wait til next chapter!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

:pinkiecrazy::moustache:

4317921
I await this moment of filly-slapping with bated breath.

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