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Ron Jeremy Pony


What to say about me... I'm a novelist, I enjoy writing Fanfiction (seriously I like it. Although I mainly do Justice League or Highschool of the Dead), and thanks to Dr. Whooves I found FIM.

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Rarity has always been a little theatrical, and enjoyed having her drama queen moments, but being on Earth has brought some other things to light. She's become friends with several fashion designers, been able to expand her craft here in the human world, but after the death of Rainbow Dash's human coltfriend she's starting to realize the even bigger differences between their two worlds, or perhaps she's simply getting a fresh dose of what life is really like without magic.

A chance encounter has also opened her eyes to discrimination that's happening back at home, and is ignored by those set to govern. Unsure of what to do, or how to do it, Rarity must decide what is important to her. Is love and happiness truly better than peace and security?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

I must say I am quite impressed with the way this is going.

You have some very minor grammatical errors; just a missing comma here and there is all, though. You prose is solid and your technique is well in this, and you have my attention for more. You are able to make the characters come to life and convince me about the situation.

Starfall's Score:
8.7/10. Well-written. This story is just shy of a written nirvana.

"Room for rent"? That's not on your story list :rainbowhuh:

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No it's not. Drax99 has opened up his 'Room for Rent' Universe for spinoffs. I've completed one (I Love this Bar), and am currently writing two (Uptown Girl, and Be Careful what you Wish for). He said that as long as the story reflects the feel of his own story then it can be considered cannon in that universe. Ergo everything that happens in I Love this Bar happened in the 'Room for Rent' universe, and the same can be said for Up Town Girl and when I finally publish it Be Careful what you With for.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :pinkiehappy:

I found it rather enjoyable so far, and the setup is rather interesting. I think this is a nice follow up to the last story and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

This story isn't half bad, I'm glad I gave it a chance. I don't understand the lack off interest and the dislikes though.

Happy to see a new part to this story. I didn't notice anything that stood out as wrong but I'll tell you if I catch any in the future.

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