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Twilight tries casting a new spell using the magic of friendship and manages to do something amazing and incredible. Unfortunately. Now her friends are all acting strange and big hats seem to be in style. Will she unravel the mystery of just what happened?

A silly little one-shot that came from a passing thought. Personally, I blame Discord.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

Inoffensive enough, some giggles, very obvious but that's kinda expected. I was all ready to call this a sucess!

Until...

Now I wore this hat for nothing and this whole thing is like, 20% less cool.”

this whole thing is like, 20% less cool.

20% less cool.

:facehoof:

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Arzoo #2 · Apr 24th, 2014 · · 2 ·

Title is The Aristocrats.

Rating is Everyone.

Failure of the highest order.

Made me laugh. Good read.


4282963 Did you actually read the story? It doesn't contain anything offensive.

4283002

That's my complaint.

You're obviously unfamiliar with what The Aristocrats typically refers to...

This is hilarious. Great job.

4283003 No, I know perfectly what it's about: gross-out humor.

I don't have a lot of experience writing comedy, so it was fun looking at the mechanics fueling the humor in this one. First Twilight making excuses for past discrepancies, then the bunch of them getting into a situational tug-of-war over a misunderstanding that the reader understood perfectly. If you feel the concept is ridiculous, I'm assuming that's because it's not up to your usual standards. I enjoyed it, though. :twilightsmile:

Well, this little story is one of the hidden gems on this site. Well done! :yay:

Aww, you made Pinkie Pie into Xenagos!

There was 100% too little incestual fisting. I am disappoint. Still, it was a silly read.

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