Cutie Mark Crusaders: Collective Princess

After changing their legal status from three individual ponies to one alicorn princess, the Cutie Mark Crusaders take it upon themselves to oversee the Rainbow Falls Trade Exchange, but quickly go mad with power and nonsense.

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memphisgurl

memphisgurl #1 · Apr 24th, 2014 · · ·

Really cute and funny!

Slendermare

Slendermare #2 · Apr 24th, 2014 · · ·

Loved it.

RaylanKrios

RaylanKrios #3 · Apr 24th, 2014 · 6 · ·

"A donut does not equal the value of a bagel and that is final!"

truer words have never been spoken.

Ushizaki

Ushizaki #4 · Apr 25th, 2014 · · ·

It was funny to see them with power also the 3 fillies make such logic with the different kinds of ponies.

Orangecraz

Orangecraz #5 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · ·

...Wat?

...I LOVED IT!!!!!

Fluttercheer

Fluttercheer #6 · Apr 30th, 2014 · · ·

This is the most hilarious fanfiction I ever read. Not kidding.
It's short, the plot is forced for comedic sake and there is totally no explanation for what is going on.
And yet it is genius.
Seeing the Cutie Mark Crusaders being royalty, playing their games with their subjects, while having a heck of fun with it, is simply too hilarious to describe it with proper words.
I almost want to say, write a similar fanfic, build up everything more and let them being much longer in their position, but I don't dare to, because that would destroy the genius simplicity of this story.
Great work, I don't know anymore when I laughed so hard like this the last time!

Royal Crusaders FOR THE WIN!

Space Pony

Space Pony #7 · May 2nd, 2014 · · ·

4317245 I'm glad you liked my story, I aim to make people laugh. If you ever would like to remake this, feel free. It could've used more build to the climax, but I was too lazy to do that.

Fluttercheer