5 years of age.
I was happy with mommy and daddy. We didn't have much money, and scary people were on the street a lot, but daddy had a job and had a gun to scare the scary people. I was bullied at school because I was small and skinny, but mommy and daddy always cheered me up when I got home. Mommy always told me that as long as we had each other, we would be ok. Mommy and daddy sometimes took me out to the park, we had a ball that I got for Christmas. We were happy.
6 years of age
(note: some time lapses and bad spelling.)
14th: momy and dady bot me this jornal for my berthday! im going to write in it every day!
20th: dady didnt come home today, momy also got a vositor who mad her sad. i dont like it when momys sad. after the visitor whent, momy told me that dady whont be coming home for a while. then momy whent in her room and cryed. where is dady? i miss him.
21th: momy says that she needs to get a job. I askd her why and she said that its becuse dady is gon. I miss him.
22th: momy was at her job whial i was at scool. i was alone for a litle wile becuse she was still at work. but we had fun when she got home.
3th: the house cryed last nigt. i herd the wod creaking. momy says that we need to go to a homless selter soon becuse its not safe anymore. i asked her how dady will find us if we move. she said that dady has ways. she looked very sad.
4th: scary people came in the day when momy and me were playng. They did things to her that she didnt like. and they trew me out. i wached trou the windo. after that they cut her alout. and after they left i went back in. momy isnt brething any more. why wasnt dady back to help us? he could help momy.
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And so, little John became an orphan. A few days after those events, he was found on the streets. He was still crying for someone to help his mother. He was sent to the orphanage, where he was bullied. And when he reported the bullying to the caretakers, they told him to stop lying about their best behaving orphans. And so, this is how he grew up to hate the world that had taken everything good from him.
How does one bull?
4735456 opps, thanks for pointing that out.
4735469 You're welcome. I'm happy to help!
Again, you're using 'where' where you mean to use 'were'.;)
Dang. No wonder he hates humans.
4736086 Opps, one again I need to fix my spelling. Spell check cant save me forever.
*looks back at the childish writing halfway through*
Practicing for what?
Hope you had a nice little vacation from writing and by god that's a lot of spelling mistakes so I hope it's on purpose.
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It was a very good camping trip, thanks for asking! And those spelling mistakes where because I was writing for a six year old. I sometimes look back at things that I wrote way back when, and I am stunned by the mistakes.
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Practice getting my word count back up. I'm having trouble writing because of my trip.
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Phew, I was hoping for that. Oh and I know how you feel there, it's almost like I was a completely different person back then.
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Yep, a person who forgot to put in any vowels.
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Oh! Makes sense.
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Though I feel I should mention that backstory is one word.
4736797 Dangit! I need to start sending them to you BEFORE I post them again!
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