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An old Brony who sometimes writes fanfiction though I have slowed down a bit in recent months. I mostly do Let's Plays on YouTube now.


My Little Halloween Special!
After hearing a rumor about a ghost town and a very special game of tag, Twist and several other kids disappear. The Cutie Mark Crusaders follow the rumor to rescue them, but discover that some rumors may be real.
Crossover with Kakurenbo: Hide & Seek

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 49 )
#1 · Oct 25th, 2011 · · · Rumor ·

Iwatch Onigokko on adultswim once, VERY SCARY series.

:rainbowderp: I actually didn't know there was an Onigokko show on adultswim. Whatever that actually is, this is based on something different.

This is a little scary and very well-written. Also, I won't be too disappointed if a certain pair of fillies don't make it out...

*doesn't make it out :twilightblush:

#5 · Oct 28th, 2011 · · · Tag... ·

DANG MAN! good work! scary as hell.

holy......i'm going to have nightmares write more!

#7 · Oct 31st, 2011 · · · Tag... ·

Oh yes. Nothing gets me more excited than the death and torture of marshmallow ponies and the ruination of a whole universe based on some game that is meant to be a nihilist's masturbatory fantasy. Isn't it all so beautiful?

So well written. So well crafted. So worthy of being spit on for it's ugliness.

This story <3

#9 · Oct 31st, 2011 · · · Tag... ·

Oh goodness, I think I need more of this. :raritydespair:

:derpytongue2: that was awesome scary story, I love it. I want it to continue with new players he he:pinkiecrazy:

:rainbowlaugh: Ha ha ha. Wow! You actually want more? Based on these comments so far, I'm kind of getting the feeling that most readers aren't reading into the metaphorical ending. :derpytongue2:
Even if I did write more, it would still pretty much be the same situation. Then again, the ability to fly and use magic would come into play... :rainbowderp:
Hmm... I really didn't plan on continuing this particular project (since it is complete) nor did I plan on writing a sequal. I don't know, if responses are really this positive, I may have to do another horror fic next Halloween. Different subject matter though. :twistnerd: By the way, I actually don't hate Twist. It was just convienient for the plot.:scootangel:

#12 · Nov 1st, 2011 · · · Tag... ·

I'm scared for this fic before reading... I know how that anime movie went... So it can't end well. *reads anyway.*

21817 what was the metaphor of the ending? :rainbowhuh:

:scootangel: I can't just say it. Maybe it's not as obvious as I thought though.:twilightblush:

#15 · Nov 1st, 2011 · · · Tag... ·

I was a bit nervous about reading this after I read the preview on EQD and realized it was based on Kakurenbo. I still remember watching the movie as a kid and having it scare me shitless. Thanks for making a great crossover fic that takes the original and adds a wonderful twist to it.

To be honest, I didn't get why you named it Bronyville until the ending. Instead of human batteries, the ponies are being used to fuel brony fandom, genius! I loved your choice of monsters. (The Walker reminded me of Pyramid head for some reason, go figure.) And, except for the spider demon and demon leader that I remember being in the movie, they were different from the film but just as scary.

Great work, and thank you for making me relive such a hauntingly memorable film all over again with my latest fandom.

22126:pinkiehappy::raritystarry: Yes! Absolutely. You hit it right on the head. And yes, the Walker was partly inspired by Pyramid Head so double points!

awesome history, i will really like a second part with the new players xD, but with Flying and Magic will be like cheating just like Discord game xD

:twilightblush: Um... I didn't say I was actually going to do another part. In fact, I get the feeling that the magic that prevents players from leaving would stop flying too somehow, and that the monsters are immune to magic or something. Anyway, since I feel a little bad for doing this to the CMC and friends, I'm kinda sworn off horror for the moment. This is the first horror fic I've ever written in fact. Normally, I do comedies.

#19 · Nov 2nd, 2011 · · · Tag... ·

i got scared on the Scootaloo part she's my favorite MLP character

Thank you for a well-written and entertaining story. It was quite enjoyable.

Don't hate me, but I think some of them deserved it. Whether it for their stupidity & ignorance, (sweetie belle[even though she is adorable] ,snips and snails) or just bitches,(scootaloo, diamond tiara, silver spoon). Twist deserved it for being too damn Twist.

why are you being so cruded :fluttercry: these poor fillies are STUCK like that FOREVER in a HUGE MECHANICAL CLOCK TOWER FOR CRYING OUT LOUd i even had a nightmare i was all like :rainbowderp: when i turned one crap and when i heard walking i was like:twilightoops: aww crap then when it was just my mom i was saying:ajsleepy: phew then i the next thing i know i'm watching a horror movie then i'm like:pinkiegasp: then i faint

So is that a posotive review or a negative reiview or... :rainbowhuh:
In any case, it looks like I generally acomplished what I set out to do and made a creepy story that readers found scary. :pinkiehappy:
:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: Sometimes it's better to be evil.

26432 Hey, Sweetie Belle was against it the whole way!

@GW: You ought to write the Cube series next. Also, was the bit mentioned in oegiap's comment the "metaphorical ending"? I got that, when I read it. It was mildly amusing... lightheartedness in a horrorfic!? :raritydespair:

That said, the first few times I read "Bronyville," I groaned and facehoofed and clawed at my eyes and tore at my hair and had to get up and walk away, only to come back, start reading, and see it again.

I'm glad there was at least a reason for that horrible, horrible name... ugh. Mostly males... Bronyville.


I played Onigokko before last one out first one in
Then the mask came...

Wow! THIS is a great horror fic! :pinkiecrazy: It was suspenseful, it was scary, and very well planned out and very well written! Looks like the Main 6 are stuck in the game now(I don't think they will go down so easily, but I digress). I can't wait to see what other horror fics you may have planned for the future. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

Well, October is pretty close and I have a big project planned that I've been working on since January. If all goes according to plan then my next big horror type fic will be released all throughout that month. I'm not sure it's quite as scary as Onigokko, but it certainly has the creepy feel.

981735 Sweet! I look forward to it!

I really hate it when AMAZING fanfics like this barely get any views or ratings. You deserve them! :flutterrage:

P.S Please tell me what this is based on! I love scary stuff!


:twilightblush: Well thank you very much. You flatter me deeply. And it is based on Kakurenbo: Hide and Seek, which is a thirty minute anime.

This... words cannot explain... the pure genius... AMAZING!

I :facehoof:'d at the name "Bronyville", but I'll be damned if this story didn't creep me out. You managed to capture the mood of 'Kakurenbo' very very well, and I also detected a slight 'Silent Hill' influence as well which, after reading that Pyramid Head inspired the "Walker", was apparently quite intentional.

Well done!

kakurenbo, look it up on youtube.

well written and it is a great remake of the show.
you make Fluttershy very happy.
:fluttershysad:but I hate horror stories.

This is simply amazing! You must write more horror fics, you must! :raritydespair: But seriously, consider it. You've got some talent, my man. I AM impressed. :trixieshiftright:


As it happens, EqD is doing a horror fic contest right now, and I am going to try to right something for it, which should be up before Oct. 24th, so... there is that. Actually Onigokko is a standard that I'm worried about living up too. For me at least, it seems a bit difficult to top. :twilightoops:

when you mentioned the Everfree Forest once being sacred, thats actually very believeable

The part with the "Monkey!" outburst from Sweetie Belle was very funny!

The part with the tag game was VERY creepy.

a few things about chapter 1 so far
when i read abandoned city in the everfree forest, my first thought was story of the blanks
when i read "bronyvilly" i facepalmed
and when i got to the end of chapter 1, it started reminding me of a darker version of castle-mania

i don't even know what to say

i am at a loss for words, i like grimdark, but i don't like horror movies, because horror movies tend to be cliche and stupid

this on the other hand is genuinely frightening, even more frightening with the fact that it's the CMC and their classmates

one more thing, not having any knowledge on the source material, that hide and seek anime, has made this fanfic that much more enjoyable

one more thing
the spider reminded me of Mimi from Super Paper Mario

and after watching Kakurenbo Hide and Seek, i must say, you out creeped the source material




A sister town was proposed, but never got past the planning stages because nopony could agree on whether to call it Pegasisterville or Femalebronyville.

Nice touch, btw, on the lights spelling out Onigokko.

21817 So, that would make her a Plot Twist?

Edit: I just realized that with the Mane 6 plus Cheerilee makes it another group of seven.

The game never ends... muhahahaHAHAHAHAHA!...

Well, this is a well made crossover fanfic story of Kakurenbo: Hide and Seek. You really gotten the feel and theme of the anime quite well, yet at the same put your own spin on it and perhaps surpassed it in more ways then one. I can honestly say that I wouldn't mind reading a sequel to this, even through I know what's going to happen to the Mane 6 and Cheerilee. because I would like to see how they handle the situation they got themselves in and what their encounters with the demons be like. :twilightsmile:

So good story and keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

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