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coolmyassburnsthings
Its me Smoky or coolmyassburnsthings as you may know me from tumblr
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uhh and By the way.... IF you dont like it, we would love to know why x3
I liked this! Although, it COULD have used a bit more build up on the storyline. But for your first FIMfic (even though I haven't published any yet
) is something I give my kudos to. 
It's okay, my biggest complaint is that the format isn't always cohesive and it feels a bit hastily made.
4281780 Yes the format is a bit.. unexpected bad xD Wrote it in Gdoc. May have a tio to get rid of the bad formating ?
4281077 NomNom Thanks alot x3 Its my first Fiction over all and also in English
4282272 I suggest using microsoft word instead of Google docs if you've got it.
P.S: OH MY GOSH! You're picture is so cite, I just wanna cuddle it so hard.
4284810 Okay ! I will try ! Thanks x3
Your story is coming along great. I see a couple of gramatical errors. Other than that its amazing.
It is a good story, I personally think that you should continue, but I really hope for something like story and not just sex every chapter like some fics do
I would suggest not labeling it foalcon if you already gone and aged them up, that's false advertising. which is a shame cause I've yet to see anyone actually just go ahead do a proper luna/pip foalcon fic.
4334895 It is foalcon in the 2nd Chapter and will get more Foalcon in the third, which i currently work on.
4312210 Next Chapter will have Story.
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Sweet, I cannot wait!
4334895 basically it's still foalcon cause he was in a dream and dreaming of being an adult
4682063 doesn't count in my book
4683072 Whatever floats your boat,dude.
4691321 Yes, clearly, captain obvious.
(see, i can use emotes to!)
Just wanting to keep you update: Duo to some problems( Aka Blog Termination, Graphic tablet breaking, my apartment nearly burning down whatsoever) I didn't had time nor the head to write further. Updates are planned.
Its well written, but I feel cheated,,,