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Name: Lyra Heartstrings
Age: 15
What would you say if I told you about a girl who was in high school. One day, she gets a package. Not a normal package. Inside this package is a box of candies. So, she decides to eat some of them. One minute, she's happily enjoying the treats, and the next she's been turned into a mint green unicorn with a green and white mane and tail. All she wants to do is get back to normal. Don't believe me? Believe it. Cause that's what happened to me.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 77 )

Woah. What is this? :rainbowderp: its amazing... :heart:

ERMAHGERD!!! DO WANT!!!

4348598 Yup! I always have like Human-Turned-Lyra fics.

Wow, this is really well-written and has a catchy start..
And you're really at the age of 15? Even if not, I have to say, I'm honestly impressed!
Further on, very little grammar mistakes as far as I can see. Keep an eye out to write 'I' with a capital letter when referring to yourself, I haven't spotted anything else though. If you want, you can always consider having a proofreader. :twilightsmile:

Anywho, you have definitely deserved a like + favourite on my part and I'm eagerly awaiting for more, good luck! :yay:

P.S. -- The thumbnail picture is so darn cute!
Edit: Just saw in the autor's note: "Head-cannon"? It's supposed to be with one 's' I think, silly! :rainbowlaugh:
i.imgur.com/nEBzZdI.png

4348942 I am 15 :) thanks for the favorite! also, yeah sometimes I forget to capitalize my I's. :derpytongue2: lol glad you like! :P

Color me interested. I'm gonna watch this to see where it goes. Also, I like the head-canon; it makes so much sense it gives me a headache.

4349042 lol thanks!....I..think...:derpytongue2: lol

4349076 It was a compliment. I just come across really serious sometimes. My bad. :ajsleepy:

4349082
Try using more emoticons! :pinkiehappy:

4349082 lol its fine I was joking hence the :derpytongue2: face XD lol :)

4349203 Lol. I kinda live under a social rock :unsuresweetie:

4349228
Heh, I'm socially awkward when it comes to girls of my age, I have no problem or whatsoever with anyone else.. :applejackunsure:
We all have our things..

4349275 Got that right. :eeyup: Though since I joined the fandom this past December, I've started interacting more. (Mostly online, but that's besides the point.)

4349303
Ah well, I just try to follow Winston Churchill's quote for this kind of stuff.

"Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts."

Besides, did you join the fandom, as in getting interested in the show starting from past december? Or did you join the fiction site from then?

4349311 Both, actually. At least, officially. It's a funny story really. :rainbowlaugh: If you want I could send you a short PM with it.

4349387
I actually was about to ask for it.. What a coincidence. :pinkiecrazy:

Quick note: There is already a fic called Anthropology, and it's rather famous. You, however, seem to be going different paths. Still you should be compared for preparations, and prepared for comparisons.

4349480 yea I didnt know about Anthropology until I had come up with the title already... :/

Love it!!! Please add moar!


(Also, First!)

4353655 wow you read fast...:derpytongue2:

4353656 In the second grade, I read at a post-college, with the ability to Understand what had been written. In other words, yeah.

4353660 *thanks Cage and tilts head to side* You don't say?!

...Liiiittle too fast here. You want to explore the character a bit.

"Great. Every girl's dream. A hairy butt." I mocked.

You got a chuckle out of me with that one :derpytongue2:

These are some quality chapters right here! Can't wait for the next one! :twilightsmile:

I noticed a few errors here and there. However I can say that I look forward to reading this.

Hmmm so Lyra appears after season 1 episode 10....

MOAR!

if that's ok. :twilightblush:

4356720 just my thought...lol

hey guys I wanna say thanks for all the awesome feedback! Also, a note, Lyra's adventures are going to be happening during the episodes and i'll kinda intertwine them. There will be a few exceptions like when there are multiples of lyra in the same place, so i'm gonna save myself the headache and not do those. Hope you guys enjoy this series! I know i sure am looking forward to it! :) :pinkiehappy:

I like the Story so far. Hope there will be more in the near future :pinkiehappy:

I was about to say something bad About You But This could be Good I Guess?:unsuresweetie:

I totally enjoy it^^

Will be interesting when Lyra tells them how she is and from where she comes :pinkiehappy:

Looks at cover image. I remember that gif. It is adorable.

1st Chapter Umm No? :ajsleepy:

Not Readying Im Done With You (I STILL LOVE MINECRAFT FICS!! MAKE MORE AND YOUTUBERS LIKE SMOOSH AND OTHER AND CONTINUE TOBY!!!!! CAPS FOR THE WIN!!)

4377762 ? ok thanks....i think....um...

Why can't I give this story a second like?! :twilightangry2:

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