Discord
Discord smirked as he spun himself around on his dragon foot, looking at the crowd of ponies gathered around him. “Oh this is just lovely, I finally have the whole set!” He said, taking out a piece of paper, marking something with his claw.
“Now I suppose you’ll need new names...”He said, rubbing his chin, moving his talons through his goatee. “Lets start with you, my little half-dead friend.”
“New names?” The shorter male pony spoke up. “I think my name is perfectly fine, thank you very much.” His tone had a bit of a sharp bite to it.
“Shush little Dust Storm, I wasn’t talking to you, now let the grown-ups speak.” Discord said, snapping his fingers. I looked back at who Discord called Dust Storm for a snappy comeback from him, but his mouth had been magically removed. “Anyone else want to interrupt?” No one spoke up. “Good, now where was I?”
“Oh yes, my little ghost friend.”He said with glee, looking back at his current target. “Hmmm..well you’re dead, partly...sorry about that by the way, lost track of time.” He said, patting my head. “Ahh I know, Dead Ink!” He shouted, a light bulb appearing above his head, floating between his horns.
He then focused on one of the other males, the one with grey fur and white mane. “Now, what should I call you my very pale looking friend? My you look so pale, you could be a ghost!”
“Listen here, you Q wanna be!” The stallion responded, thrusting one of his forelegs out at Discord ”I have a life thank you very much, i’d rather not be the plaything of a bored frankenstein freak.”
“My dear pony, you think in such a grey color scale, I’m not a frankenstein monster. Im the God of Chaos. And you’re more than just my plaything. You six are so, so, much more. Now shush, im thinking.”
The light bulb above his head now lit up so bright it exploded. “Ding ding ding! You’re as a pale as a ghost and such a grey thinker. You can be Grey Ghost!” He chuckled to himself. “I’ve already named my dear friend Flutter Glitter here, so who by chance is left?” he asked himself.
“Did you seriously just give me the name of a Batman character?” The grey stallion responded, his eye twitching a bit.
“My dear Grey Ghost, I don't know what you’re talking about, what is this ‘Bat Man’ you speak of?” Discord asked sarcastically. His eyes focused on the one he called John.
“Well, John doesn’t really suit you anymore.”He said, looking the stallion over. ”Why must all but one of you be grey? Really limiting me here. I probably should have given all of you better color schemes. I probably should Lust for more next time.” He complained, crossing his arms. “Ah, speaking of lust, I feel yours. A lust for answers, a lust for more. you have so much lust you could just explode like….. Luster Star! that is your name. What perfection!” Discord exclaimed, pyrotechnics exploding from around him randomly.
“So we have Luster Star, Flutter Glitter, oh and sorry about turning you into a girl. The group needed one. Dead Ink, Dust Storm, Grey Ghost, and Gold Rush. Quite a group!” DIscord exclaimed.
“DISCORD!” Dust shouted, a very angry look covering his muzzle. Discord shifted his gaze back to Dust. His mouth had returned once Discord ignored him.
“Yes?” Discord asked, singsong like.
“Why are we here? What do you want from us?” He asked, shaking in anger, doing a rather poor job at hiding it.
“Entertainment. Im bored. Why else?” Discord asked.
“But why bring us? We don’t even belong wherever this is.” I asked.
“Because there’s simply not enough ponies in Equestria.” Discord.
“Thats a bunch of ponyfeathers!” Gold Rush exclaimed. “Speaking of ponyfeathers, why are we in the royal gardens? Where are all the guards?” He asked.
Discord simply looked around. “Oh yeah, forgot to turn that off.” He clapped twice. A familiar jingle seemed to come from nowhere. “Clap Off.”
The royal gardens disappeared and we looked to be in the foyer of a giant mansion. “Welcome to your new home boys!” Discord exclaimed with a southern styled accent.
I looked around us; the place was huge! I noticed mysterious collective wisps of air. One was holding a tray. If you hadn’t been looking it would have looked as though the tray was floating.
“Yes those are the Will-o-the-wisps, they do whatever you WILL them to do.” Discord said, laughing at his ingenuity. “They don't really have a mind of their own though.. sort of like undead zombie servants. Ooh, there’s an idea!” Discord pulled out a notebook and pen out of nowhere and wrote something down. The wisps simply disappeared. “Save that idea for later shall we?” he muttered. “Now on to the tour!” he said. Snapping his fingers, we found ourselves no longer in the foyer, but now we were in the kitchen. He called out each place as he snapped his fingers, giving us barely a second to look around. “Kitchen. Bedrooms. Living Room. Game Room. Workshop. Gym. Nursery. Gardens…” he continued on.
“Wait- wait a moment? Nursery?” Flutter asked, finally speaking up.
“Oh god...I feel like i’m going to vomit..”Ghost says, putting a hoof to his mouth, looking even paler now.
“I’m used to rapid teleportation, and even I’m not feeling so great.” Dust muttered, shaking his head.
Discord appeared in Flutters face. “Dont worry.. that will come in handy later.” Discord said, chuckling. He finally snapped his fingers once more, and we were in a hallway with 6 doors, a picture on each of the doors matching the tattoos on our flanks. “Enjoy, I will let you settle in before I let anything happen. Now if you’ll excuse me, i have some rainbow cotton candy to eat.” He disappeared, leaving the 6 of us just standing in the hallway.
“I need to go check my sanity.” Ghost said going into his room, gagging a bit. He shut the door behind him, the sound of vomiting being heard not too long afterwards.
“I have a triple patrol to do, and two research papers to publish.” Dust seemed rather annoyed, as if this were nothing more than a waste of his time. “Discord’s been messing with my magic, teleporting out is a no-go.”
I stood in the hall, watching as everyone else went into their own rooms. Finally i went into my own, and laid down on the bed. “Killed after doing my own job. Bucking great.” my eyes opened wide. “Buck, Buck, Buck.” Any time i tried to swear it came out… pony translated. This was going to be a long night.
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Later That Night….
Gold Rush removed his goggles, having been at the work bench for awhile. Discord had brought all of his supplies and tools to the workshop. The same ones he had been using for his work at his place. “Finally complete.” he whispered to himself. “IT IS DONE!” he said, holding up his ray.
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Gold Rush? Why is he named Gold Rush?
Well , it's just a OC name, really didn't tie his personality to his name.
Oh derp silly me. That and I can't write foal talk.
Well my thought was he would sell it to hospital or something like that. I guess i forgot to add that explanation in. That and the machine part was rushed a bit, yeah i know it seems pointless, really only comes into play for one chapter so yeah...
Derp..yeah I think was rushing the last bit a tad so yeah i'll have to edit that part too.
Yeah...I really need to rewrite that last part...thanks for pointing that major hole there guess i was too caught up in getting it done to remember he was chasing a faol there this whole time.
4346475 The ideals behind Dead Ink
yes he is a ghost.
when he is in living mode, he is a pegasus.
while he is in dead mode, he sheds his wings and grows a horn. because as a ghost he gains levitation magic and such
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we each had a niche that discord used to pull us to the foalish zone.
shagos was the fossil, dust was lunas letter, zubric was the foal, flutters was anti-boredom, lusters was his ego. My niche was my anger... i dont like to get angry, but when i get angry i use it. Discord took that anger and multiplied it... i didnt know that though so it wasnt written in my chapter
4351983 well.. I'm normally a happy go lucky guy... I keep my anger in check most times... Like Bruce banner and the incredible hulk, except I don't get big and green and invincible.
So yeah... I got mad at one thing, which allowed discord to take that anger and stretch it like taffy
4351965 pretty much.... Its like Danny phantom... That show even exist anymore? It was a nikelodean show where a kid could turn from a human into a ghost because of a freak accident.
I know that show, but don tknow if it still airs.
4357664 i dont know how long chapter 8 will take... but i know weve already passed 4000 words
4357757 anyone get the rainbow cotton candy?
4357776 only dust storm and zubric are actual ponies.... the rest of us are humans....
we all get sucked into discords own personal reality which looks like a gardens but is actually the foalish zone.. its like a giant plot of land in canterlot... but if you try and go to far you realize youre not in equestria anymore
This chapter, I like it.
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4358054 we have another coming reel soon
UPDATE:
We've finished writing the new chapter. It's time for final edits and running it by everypony before we're done.
wait a second Flutter glitter was a boy before being made a pony well so as we know shes gonna be age regressed and with that have the odd feeling of being a foal and a girl so when she needs to go she (he) feels odd or something