That was certainly a thing. A fascinating, horrifyingly relatable thing. (This isn't the first poo fic I've read either, somehow.)

You should add this to the My Little Toilet Group, dedicated to scat and watersports

You sir, have great potential. I hope to see more from you.

In ways I can neither describe nor appeal, nor admit in polite company, I enjoyed the read. More poo stories please!

That just happened.

Less clop, more of "been there before"... that ending line is hilarious.

Yes...YEEEEES!

I am greed! I am desire! I am the internet's insatiable gluttony made flesh and I say unto you

MOAR

This is actually quite nice. Kinda cute, even if it does include a fairly detailed description of Octavia emptying her bowels and then intense relief thereof.

A lot of the jucier bits near the beginning of the story, as well as the desperation bit, are told to us through narrative. It's understandable to explain the biological parts of what's going on, but it would do to get some inner thoughts from Octavia herself so we could get a sense of the urgency she's feeling. Instead of telling us she's embarrassed, have her think about how embarrassing it is.

still came pretty hard during the bathroom scene, so good job overall. thanks for sending this to me

It was a little disgusting but awesome

Wow...

Interesting story....

but that ending... beautiful... just beautiful...