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An unexpected event leaves Twilight pony-napped and Celestia distraught. Now, the rest of the elements have to search for Twilight, while cautious of an enemy who wasn't as gone as they thought.

Cover made by my head editor/proofreader: http://longloststranger.deviantart.com/

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

I liked it. I truly did.
Now I'm waiting for the rest of it.

‘It’s finally time to show Celestia that you won't be ignored anymore.’
"any longer" instead of "anymore" would be better.

*For lack of a better word
It is ok to include this in books, but not in here, because no one wants to scroll down and up multiple times when you have a really long chapter.

I like it.

(Eric D.)

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Thanks for the feedback ;):heart::heart::heart:

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