Raptor, Skyrim's deadliest warrior, is the last Dragonborn to step foot in Nirnian soil.
What happens when a trap, placed by ancient nords, sends him into a whole new land? He is happy to be here, as there is much more to explore. But first, he has to figure out why he's a statue!
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Hay I named my skyrim character raptor too
interesting, *gives it a quick read*
I see two likes and six dislikes.
This can mean one thing.
MORE CHAPTERS
Alright, from the unoriginal title, to the metric tone of errors in the description and chapter name, even the characters name! proves that this story will be horrible. I'm not bothering reading it.
OH! and did I mention the completely irrelevant cover art? You need to read more stories and learn to write a fic before you attempt one.
4664872 first of all i am changing things and getting an editor and second of all that cover art is sort of relevant showing the awkwardness of being in a full suit of deadric armour.
Who are you to judge someones name in a semi-serious story.
I guess not everyone can be happy.
4664906 The proof that shows that this story will be bad is one: In the chapter name, "damnit!." Damn it is TWO words and only an exclamation point is needed, not both.
In the title: The dragon born comes. WRONG
The Dragonborn comes: CORRECT
The description:
SO MUCH WRONG!!!
The correct version:
Not perfect, but a lot better than before. Want me to be the editor?
And the picture is irrelevant because it's obviously a Skyrim Convention! You can see someone dressed as a Nord in the background! It would make much more sense if he was in Ponyville or Canterlot or at least have ponies instead of humans! I can judge a story when it has that many errors in the title, description and the chapter name alone. Those ten dislikes? Those are probably from people like me, who see the title and name and think "This story obviously sucks, instant dislike." We are humans, we judge things on title. Fix what we see first, and people might read it more. Right now, the people reading this, are people who don't care about quality, which is about .2% of the people on Fimfiction.
4667885 thanks for criticising the story, I fixed what you asked me to do and I already got an editor to do the first chapter.
He is a genius and you should give the story a try now.
the editors name is TheSentience
Take that twi
4672289 did you translate what raptor said, it would make twilight even more pissed off if she understood.
4672301 nope
4672314 the translator for the dragon language is in the description, heres a snip at the translated version of what raptor said to twilight.
Hefha:in english:idiot
Not to break your bubble, but "Raptor" doesnt exactly sound like a Nord name, or a thalmor name, or anything's name at all.
4675610 first of all Raptor is a Argonian, second of all this is a semi-serious story and raptor is from my first play through of skyrim so don't expect most seriousness from a first playthrough character.
This story will gradually become more serious as it goes on.
The end all the rambling
4693359 Wut?
Is this story dead?
You are forgiven.....continue
5960474 I will post another chapter after I finished another for flesh of a primal predator
5960591 gooood............