• Member Since 16th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 19th, 2016

Slick Dash


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A short and happy story about Vinyl Scratch's first ever concert! When everything goes wrong, she needs to dart out to the local music store, where she meets a certain grey cello playing earth pony.
A tale of ambition, and a random red eyed and blue haired DJ pony!

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 14 )

I like this, it's good and it ha Vinyl and Octavia.

Too late to read now, but damn this looks pretty good. Then you deserve a real comment in the morn. :pinkiehappy:

not bad....quite a bit of spelling errors and typos.
punctuation kinda fluctuates between story and crack-fic. i can't tell :rainbowkiss:

get a pre-reader?

Goodness, it didn't help that I was listening to Perfume while reading this. :twilightblush:
Insta-follow; 44/50 on my grading scale. Awesome job. Let me know if you want more details on what I thought (not used to this whole commenting system yet).

Good writing,
Sosai

damn, damn, damn, he does it again. Great fic you have here. the originality was refreshing, dialogue was spot on, and it was just the perfect amount of excitement and emotion to bring a short fic good closure. cudos to ya Slick Dash, another great fic in the bag!

391787
Definitely agreeing with you here. Concept is great, and I'm sure there were gems of lines written here... but every spelling error or grammatical fumble ruined my suspension of disbelief.

400297>>391793 yeah, :applejackunsure: it really needs to be done. I just get so pumped about releasing one i get impatient. :rainbowlaugh: next story will have a pre-reader i think. Hope it wasn't too irritating guys. :applejackunsure:

I just read this story and i really liked it :pinkiehappy: The picture was ADORABLE i like this short kind of fic its simple but very well done :pinkiesmile:

464362 Glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiesad2: glad to see you back on these things :raritywink:

WWWEEEEEEWWWW!!!! awsome!!! :scootangel:

I like this story. It was completely original and this could be a possible canon meet up between Octavia and Vinyl. It's quick, clean, and keeps the readers interested. Good job Brony. I look forward to reading more from you.

Adieu~

This was a very charming little short story. Well done :twilightsmile:

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