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Eleven months for a baby foal to be born. Eleven months of walking around with some pony growing inside you. Eleven months of waiting.

Love Tap and her family are eagerly awaiting a new addition to their family. It should be any day now…

Cover art used with permission from RenateThePony

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 84 )

Your stories always make my day!:rainbowkiss::heart:

New story idea; Love Taps(teen) family, down on their luck, drives Love Tap to join an underground boxing society.

Nice story so far

So cute, and it's only the first chapter. :rainbowkiss:

4264200 Hanging from a cliif! And that's why he's called Cliff Hanger. :twistnerd:

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My response to every cliffhanger ever. So glad I wasn't the only one that watched that show. :rainbowlaugh:

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He might! He's been mentioned by name a few times and he was invented by JanAnimation. Now that I actually have the looks and some established character for both Gibson and Chip, I very well might use them at some point.

4264266 Yup. Cause after this comes the real headaches, diapers, formula, towels, foal food, the list goes on and on.

4264292 And poor Gibson's gonna have to put up with every aspect of it.

4264294 What's with the double reply?

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Probably just an accidental hit of the "Add Comment" an extra time, it happens.

4264306 I didn't realize I had already clicked.

4264308 I see.

Oh, and when Button Mash is old enough the worst headache of all comes along, potty training.

4264318 See that it doesn't happen again.

Such pregnant. Very baby. Wow.

Awesome as usual. Also as usual, needs another editing pass.

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Whoops. Yeah... Gibson had at least one sentence train wreck there... Fixed that and a couple other things. :twilightsmile:

4264390 I do my best, but I can't help it when my phone decides to malfunction.

Such cliffhanger. Much foal. Wow.

Sweet Celestia those are some mood swings!

4265038 Kind of surprised she hasn't had any weird cravings.

Why does this seem like a copy off of buttons mother, buttons dad, and button mash himself?

I think i like this story.

:rainbowlaugh: and "aww" at the same time. This is good so far, please update when you can!

Dan

Mammalian reproduction is often called beautiful and miraculous, but it's also a messy and thoroughly unpleasant business. Even moreso for equines. Next time you're at a State Fair or something, pay a visit to the veterinarian center or livestock birthing show.

Like shitting a bowling ball, as my parents used to say.

This story is cute and funny. I can see that Chip is responsible for Button being so goofy. I got to admit that seeing Love Tap in labor was the funniest thing you've written so far.

Dan

Protip. If you're a music lover and looking for the Star Wars soundtracks, DO NOT search for "the birth of the twins" on youtube.:pinkiesick:

Some people just feel like they have to share the magical moment with the entire world.

4269510 Button's a 'chip' off the old block isn't he? :twilightsmile:

4269511 And that's why parents use the old fashioned "The Stork" excuse. Night Light better hope there's a good mind wipe spell to save Twilight's innocence. :pinkiesick:

These mood swings are HILARIOUS!!

Hilarious!!! I want more pregnant mood swings!!!

That was beautiful and hilarious, job well done writer!

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It took a lot of effort to avoid replying to this comment right away, but have you read part two by chance? :twilightblush:

Love Tap calmly opened the cart and stepped onto the ground. Wincing slightly as yet another contraction assaulted her.

Think you meant for that to be all one sentence.

“I’m fine, sweatie. Go help your father.”

"And get a towel. To wipe off all that sweat. Because you're so sweaty."

Behind a receptionist’s desk, a young earth pony mare with a white coat, pale pink mane tied in a bun, and nurse’s hat nodded politely at the three.

"Welcome to the Ponymon Center! Would you like me to heal your Ponymon?"

Nice to know Button was BORN with his famous wailing.

D'awww at that pic.

Excellent story. As usual, your comedic timing is perfect, and the d'awws are right where they need to be and perfectly impactful. :pinkiehappy:

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Fixed! Thank you and thanks for the comments! :pinkiehappy:

I wonder, is this before or after Derpy gave birth to Dinky? Or is she pregnant with her right now?

Love Tap’s pupils started to dilate as a smile slowly poured its way onto her face like syrup onto a stack of pancakes.

BWAAHA!

Almost wish given how this story isn't pulling any punches, if we had seen her feed'em for the first time too.

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I initially thought before, but given the timing, I guess It would make more sense to say after, maybe I should adjust her lines slightly...

Placenta separating before the foal can breathe. That is not good.

I had a flashback to a Bill Cosby moment when Love Tap was calling for drugs.
...And then the first contraction hit, and my wife stood up in the stirrups, grabbed my bottom lip, and screamed, "I WANT MORPHINE!!"

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