Night Fright

When Mayor Mare decided to organize the townsponies to go to the creepy-looking mansion to force the misunderstood Night Fright out of town, she didn't consider the possibilities of what would happen.

Chapters (6)

Did I Scare You? · 21st Apr 2014 · 2,125 words
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GAME TIME · 29th Apr 2014 · 1,801 words
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Who's the Freak Now? · 21st Jun 2014 · 1,886 words
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I Don't Like To Lose · 22nd Jun 2014 · 933 words
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What Is This Feeling? · 5th Jul 2014 · 2,876 words
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Epilogue · 12th Jul 2014 · 700 words
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TEK101

TEK101 #1 · Apr 21st, 2014 · 1 · 2 · Did I Scare You? ·

Interesting enough start, but I'll have to see more before I make a final decision on liking or not.

Dimiein

Dimiein #2 · Apr 21st, 2014 · · · Did I Scare You? ·

i enjoyed this, there were some very obvious errors that should have been caught as you edited but they didnt ruin the experiance just make you look lazy. will follow and hope for more.

Comment posted by Peewee the Dragon deleted Apr 25th, 2014

Peewee the Dragon

Peewee the Dragon #4 · Apr 25th, 2014 · · · Did I Scare You? ·

4269520 After going the chapter I saw the errors. With the next one I promise not to make any.

Vindraaj

Vindraaj #5 · Apr 25th, 2014 · · · Did I Scare You? ·

This is based off of the Michael Jackson movie isn't it?

Peewee the Dragon

Peewee the Dragon #6 · Apr 25th, 2014 · · · Did I Scare You? ·

4289528 Kind of yes, I mean that's where I got the idea from.

Tiaa OwO

Tiaa OwO #7 · Jul 5th, 2014 · · · GAME TIME ·

So much WTF..... But so enticing......
Continue.

Tiaa OwO

Tiaa OwO #8 · Jul 5th, 2014 · · · Who's the Freak Now? ·

But... Wha...

Peewee the Dragon

Peewee the Dragon #9 · Jul 6th, 2014 · · · What Is This Feeling? ·

4647501 I'm guessing you like it

Tiaa OwO

Tiaa OwO #10 · Jul 6th, 2014 · · · What Is This Feeling? ·

Does this guy have bipolar disorder or something? I mean, one minute he's smiling, the next minute he's angry, then another minute he's crying.

And what is this guys name, Night Fright or Masquerade? I've gotten used to his name this far and you do this?

God, this story just keeps getting better and better. To be honest, I wouldn't be surprised if this got featured. All you need to do is fix the random capitalizations of words.

Peewee the Dragon