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Pvt

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Any hope left after the blast was wishful thinking.
A sweet, comforting lie.
It was more than most had these days though, more than he deserved if Willow was honest with himself.
But he could use the comfort, a lie would make it easier.

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The Original Gaston

The Original Gaston #1 · May 10th, 2019 · 1 · · Falling ·

Hmm...

Really hard to follow what's going on. I can see the effort you've put into it, most definitely! Buuuuuuut... it's hard to appreciate a story when I can't figure out what's happening. I mean, yeah, generally a war's going on and your main character(s?) are in the trenches between Equestria and... itself? Is it a civil war or a foreign war?

Also (correct me if I'm wrong), but isn't it abbreviated Pvt. instead of just Pvt ?

I'm giving you a like anyway.

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