That one lanky boi who tries to be in every creative portion of the fandom at once. Check my about page for all my links.
Our four 'heroes' are transported to equestria with no way to escape. Can they make a new non-violent life in this new pony ridden place of friendship? Or will they all share the same fate of insanity their German friend already suffers from?
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Good idea, but pretty bad writing in terms of punctuation.
These things bring down good fics before they start man.
Accounting for my assumption that the misspellings in the dialogue are soley due to the drunken-state of them, I didn't see too much wrong with this prologue.
I'm genuinely interested as to where this story is going, so I'll be favoriting it and seeing where it goes.
Work on the out-of-dialogue mispellings, and I hope to see more from you soon!
VODKA!!!!
Honestly, I never notice spelling or punctuation errors unless I am looking for them.
I loved this!
...Go on
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Omg, this is just... Just great.
4260890 I'm glad you like it!
xD Love it.
epic
Awesome story so far loved it
. Also can't wait to see more of THE ZE DOCTOR RICHTOFEN!! 
Tank X Fluttershy
My new OTP
More i need it like nik needs vodka
Das nice
FUCKING
AWESOME
I was actually planning on doing some CoD: Zombies stories
I already have a Mob of the Dead one planned out, I'm gonna do Origins, and then TranZit, Die Rise, and Buried
And I only have Kino der Toten for Black ops, and I don't have WaW
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i'm not sure what 'otp' means, but isn't Tank a little too on the crazy, violent, swearing, wackadoodle side for Fluttershy?
4320718 is "one true pairing"
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I take back what I said earlier. Fluttershy and Tank are perfect together
My OTP, (One True Pairing) is comming true!!!
We need Richtofen to meet
4322091 the agreement comity agrees
Hmmm, I like this, try to lower the pacing a wee bit, its going by real fast
4322091 Or is it...
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... Oh, your serious...
From what I can tell, yes...
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Ooohh
You're right
Cause Richtofen is German
And Photo Finish is also German(e).
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I want to see how Richtofen would act meeting her. It would be so good!
Well his breath HAS proven to get the undead Nazis drunk.
Hmm, I always thought Pinkie would have been the coke dealer.
Those last lines made me laugh so hard... Like baseball bat
Whens the next chapter coming out?
4607800 It's coming along. Between work, making music, and drawing it's been difficult to find writing time. But it is coming along rather nicely.
I think i've seen this story on the fanfiction website.
This is good and addictive like oxi, but no new chapters?? Are you cutting me off my DRUG?! Sheesh like mother -.-
>Round 54
>Ray Gun
>making a crawler with a grenade
kek.
That was pretty good overall, but there's one thing I didn't like, it's how everypony was like 'oh well, four giant aliens covered in dirt and blood and smelling like death, swearing all the time and one of them drinks more vodka than the average person drinks water, uh? that's a perfectly normal thing I guess, let's just let them all live here without alerting the princesses or anything, it's cool'.
I was expecting Twilight to spam questions, Rarity to go like 'blabla uncouth blabla my goodness your clothes blabla', Rainbow not to trust them at all (or be amazed by Dempsey's tales of badassery - speaking of Rainbow, I wanna see Tank meet Tank), Fluttershy to be much more scared than 'um, what are you? don't swear pls' and Applejack... well, I don't know. Ask them about apples and shit.
Pinkie was pretty much perfect though. Nikolai x Pinkie OTP (looks like he'll have to use his bare hands - always talking).
And I was expecting Richtofen to try and cut a pony open to find the source of their magic or something (and their shpleen of course).
4999926 They've seen weirder things and reacted normally, just saying. Also don't be so supsticious and you won't be disappointed.
Jessus criest! I just found this story and read all the chapters and I laugh my ASS OFF! I cant Wait till the next chapter. Also great work man.
HAHAHA
To hilarious when it comes to Dimpsey in rage mode
Just too much
This is pretty good and very good narrated. I'm impresed
It lives!!!
7437187 You know it! Fuck you, writers block!! HA!
!! Ah so good! DEm cliffhanger, but better this, is better. Thanks. (For a second there I though you was referencing to Tank the turtle XD)
Why! I read all of this beautiful piece of writing thinking it was complete but now I find this?!?! I hate you with a passion. Plus you ended up making me ship a Dempsey and Fluttershy thing. What has my life come to?
7482306 It's all part of my plan for world domination! Mwahahahaha!
But yeah, I've got a LOT on my plate in real life right now. Pretty much no time to write. It's either work or sleep. Hopefully I'll catch a break soon and print more Dope words for you guys, but for now, cliffhangers and shipping! Top kek.
Teh updates need be here is good story so far. I enjoy it but i enjoy a lot of stories. But especially cod and tf2 crossovers. Love cod zombies!! Les go kill some maggot sacks boys.
It was an honour to read such a story. (In a shitty takeo voice) i must say you do really capture everyone especially nikolai and his and i quote "wheres my fucking vodka".
Great to see its alive and not dead!
Merry Christmas eh? Keep it up!
7822049 I've done my research. They're their funny quirky selves right now. But just you wait til their back stories come into play. There's going to be a lot more depth to this than you'd expect from a zombies pony crossover. I'm keeping the comedy but there will be seriousness. The four zombies protagonists have very complex backgrounds. And I plan to bring them to light. Stay tuned. :)
7824767 Merry Christmas! It's still alive and kicking! And it will stay that way!
7825444 i cant wait it sounds amazing
nice story, when next chap?